lovino wants to tell him it isn't germany

Jul 09, 2009 20:58

title: only devils have ears
author: konbini @ rihiten
fandom: axis powers hetalia
characters/pairings: north italy, south italy, mentions of germany, spain, the vatican
words: 957
rating/warnings: character names, romano's distaste for protestants, biblical references? are these even warnings.
summary: Veneziano and Romano hide. Germany bombs the Vatican. ( Read more... )

fandom: axis powers hetalia, c: north italy, c: south italy, #oneshot

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avenue July 9 2009, 13:45:02 UTC
Well, if religion was your theme, then there's no such thing as going overboard.

This was nice. :Db
It had the right amount of depth, in confusion or anger or faith. This was very nice.

Good job!

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konbini July 9 2009, 13:56:25 UTC
aaa thank you ;; ♥ I was really worried about that, since I was afraid I'd offend someone. Or. Something.

Thanks for reading!

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midori_lover July 9 2009, 13:46:48 UTC
I didn't think you went overboard with the religious stuff. :D Or maybe that's just me orz. Anyways great fic!

~I suck at writing comments sorry >

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konbini July 9 2009, 13:58:08 UTC
That's a relief. Thanks for reading. :D

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ykyapril July 9 2009, 14:32:25 UTC
I don't think you went overboard either. And I think the fic is awesome. And I feel so sad.

And I love your title

Thank you for sharing such a good story!

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konbini July 10 2009, 12:48:36 UTC
No, thank you. :) Ah, don't feel too sad. ;;

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glareola July 9 2009, 15:53:54 UTC
Hehe, as a theology student I HAD to read this, although I rarely read fanfiction. Anyway, I can't really judge if you went overboard with the religious stuff, because I'm surrounded by it anyway.

This fic is truly amazing. I love the way you are using brackets. I wish I could describe things as beautifully as you do - I am impressed.

Uhm... may I friend you? orz

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konbini July 10 2009, 13:38:45 UTC
Aah, thank you thank you. ♥ I'm glad you liked it!

Sure thing. :)

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yangkuang July 9 2009, 16:57:15 UTC
If anything, all the religious references just made this a lot deeper. I literally got chills when I got to Eli, eli, lama sabachthani...
(And Romano does seem like he's fun to write. |D)

-sobs- People like you are why I don't write fic anymore. that and i'm blocked all the time lololololol /shot

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konbini July 10 2009, 13:42:46 UTC
I was going for that, but I wasn't sure if I nailed it.
He is! Like, next to Prussia. But I can't write Prussia.

Blocked, what?

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yangkuang July 10 2009, 20:03:28 UTC
Well, like the commenter below me, I think it only affected me so much because I've heard those words so many times XD
Yeah, well, at least you can write. orz I can't write anyone!

You know. Writer's block?

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