Halloween fic (yes, I know I'm late)

[rijane99]

Title: Dead Man's Party
Author's Note: As many of you know, this is NOT my Gala fic entry (which I personally thought blew and was written solely toward the judges and voila: third place. If I'd taken more than 2 hours and thrown in a heaping dose of spelling errors, I might have even gotten second... end snark). This is part one of my attempt to do

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[mamavampire]

Ah Rijane! No one writes Mick and Beth like you do. There's such chemistry, such a 'when he moves I move' quality to your pair, and yet, there is independence, too. I copied and pasted this into a document so I could take it to work and read it. I was anticipating it all day until I had a break and could read it. The computers at work won't let me on LJ. And LMM and I are of one mind/heart here, it is soooo good to read something new from you and the promise of multi-chapter just gives me a warm fuzzy feeling of contentment.

"Mick couldn't hold the frown, smiling despite himself. Beth pulled him close, rubbed her check against his, his lips tickling the warm wash of skin behind her ear. " Delicious, just delicious. Sigh.

Love you, girl. Such talent.

[rijane99]

Thank you. I really needed these comments today (see last night's post).

Ultimately, I see these two in the metaphor of a dance, together, in step and in the same rhythm. Sigh.

[mamavampire]

PS your snark is hilarious! snickersnicker...