[Fic] The Beautiful Letdown (for the community)

[giving_ground]

Title: The Beautiful Letdown
Author: illuminations
Recipient: the community
Pairing/Characters: Niou/Yagyuu
Rating: NC17
Warnings: Gratuitous amounts of swearing?
Disclaimer: I do not own any 2D tennis boys.
Summary: When one is in love, one always begins by deceiving one's self, and one always ends by deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.

Comments

[yuki_scorpio]

Ow. OW. That hurts in such a good way. I love the storytelling. And damn, Yagyuu. ;;

[crypticmadness]

Oh, Yagyuu. D:
It's so bitter and so pretty and Niou, poor Niou!

[darknightrain]

Oh, ow, ouch. That hurt so good. Sigh Yagyuu, sigh. But I'd be lying if I said I didn't enjoy the messed up-ness of it all, wah.

[schweinsty]

Ouch. That one hurt. Lovely writing - no extra, unnecessary wordiness, but what you have packs such a punch. Beautiful fic.

[damagepersecond]

damn it i'm crying. the perfect description of "beautifully messed up".

the story is still very lovely. even though i would have wished it to end otherwise (because i really dig happy-ending-D1-though-it's-a-fucked-up-road-on -the-way-there), i really can't deny it's a beautiful story! and how poignant the last line is...

dammit i have to stop crying inside now haha and get some sleep...