I usually go back and read things I wrote years ago and dislike it. That being said I like all the fan fiction I've written :D hahaha! Seriously with a little tweaking I could love it.
In Vamp class: "yes I know what S&M is" Prof "well you're young enough" Student "or old and dirty enough" Prof class laughs Prof looks uncomfortable "It's unfortunate I made that joke ... Let's move on"