Things I Was Forced To Cut From My Story For Class

[riley04]

"All in all, he was a fairly attractive young adult. Unfortunately the same could not be said about his partner even though Tom was sure he was in love with her. It would be unfair to lovers to say Tom was in love, it would unfair to Tom for lovers to say he was not in love. There has never been a universal agreement on the definition of love which

Comments

[forddent]

Man, why'd you cut the republican line?

And the Jesus comment. I would have kept that one in.

[vincentavatar]

I definately would have kept the second paragraph you cut. Well, I would have probably edited it to catch misspellings and to try and improve the flow of the words, but I would have kept it.