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[rileyout]

Title: Keep them cards close.
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Andy/Eddie, possible Andy/Hoosier, Eugene/Merriell, John/Lena.
Warnings: non-linear timeline.
Disclaimer: the author of this fan fiction owns nothing, and is making no profit. The characters herein are based off the actors in the series The Pacific and not the real people, no offense is meant.

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Comments

[rileyout]

I did try to make this a un-confusing as possible because that was my main worry about it, but i'm glad you enjoyed it anyway.

[rivlee]

I always love the way people weave in the canon details with modern aus. I love your parallels here of the time before and the time after. The bittersweet tone to it all, which Andy and Eddie bring out in everyone.

And major points for Lena. I'm so glad to see her in fic.

[rileyout]

Thank you for reading :D

I love Lena. She was such a brilliant person, and clearly she'd be the boss of those boys with Andy. Like a platonic mother and father relationship.

[rileyout]

Aww thank you for reading.

I was really worried about it making sense because I started writing it after I started on something else which had three different time lines and also I didn't want to overload with the characters because I'd of never kept track of them.

I wish I could be bothered to write more often, but I can't be arsed to go to uni 95% of the time

[uniformly]

i admit being a little confused about the flow of time as well, but it really doesn't matter because the interactions involved and the feel of the entire fic is amazing ♥

[rileyout]

Aww thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it either way.

[skew_whiff]

I have a huge weakness for fic that's told out of order, and I enjoyed reading this the first time as it's written, and then untangling the chronology and reading it again. (One thing, though, if my read of it is correct, your August section should be 'after' rather than 'before'.)

There's a good sense of immediacy to the choppy snippets, and I love the cameos from other characters, particularly Lena.

[rileyout]

Thank you for pointing that out, my beta has run off to Cornwall to fight space goblins or so she tells me.

I enjoyed writing this and I'm glad that it's not so overly confusing for people that it makes no sense. Lena is the only female character in that whom I liked, sort of like Renee from BoB.

Anyway thanks for reading and point that out to me.