Lol, this was cute. I like how Nino had Ohno trailing all over and other couples came into the story. Nino was all seeing, warning Ohno beforehandXD. Your summaries are superb! btw. There were grammatical errors, but this was still nice. Btw, your voice (the author's voice and tone) came into the story quite a bit. You should use that to your advantage in writing!
i know there is error that's why i asked my english teacher to beta it for me.. hehehe XD i know actually i want to write the a/n longer.. but i forget what i want to say.. hehe thanks for reading and commenting..
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KYA !!
Seriously I love it! From the start I was : kya kya kya !
These letters are KYA ♥ KYA KYA KYA ♥
I'm so happy! Each letter was so full of love !
Each time my heart was doing doki doki <3
And LOVE ♥ Seriously, each dressing room was ♥
Kya kya kya !! I'm so happy dear !! Thank you so much !
*hug you tight*
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eh? you forget that you request?
hehehehe
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But I was so happy when I understand XD
And while reading ♥
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thank you for loving it..
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Your summaries are superb! btw.
There were grammatical errors, but this was still nice.
Btw, your voice (the author's voice and tone) came into the story quite a bit. You should use that to your advantage in writing!
^-^V Thanks for sharing!
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i know actually i want to write the a/n longer.. but i forget what i want to say.. hehe
thanks for reading and commenting..
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thanks for reading and commenting
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love how nino confessed to his oh-chan
thank you so much for sharing
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never thought that nino is romantic at heart too..
thanks for reading and commenting..
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