Ah, you posted this just fine! :) Welcome to the community, girly~!
Now that that's all said and done:
This little fic was amazing ;; It's my dark, dark secret Okay, maybe not so dark, but me and oneshots just have this thing. I feel like writers always have to work so much harder to make a truly wonderful story in so little space and; I rarely run into oneshots I think are amazing, as I think a writer has to be pretty gosh darn talented to pull them off... you are one such talented writer :]
The characterizations were absolutely perfect, and the pacing was just...!! ;u; Not to mention the way you narrate is simplistic, yet very revealing about what's going on and the emotions behind the actions. Simple yet complex? Haha, I don't know! XD
I guess all I mean to say that this was amazing, and it was a wonderful way to cap off my Valentine's Day <33 Again, welcome to the community, and I hope to be reading many many, many, many!! more of your fics in the future :)
Thank you for the welcome and your kind words! ^///^ I've been feeling down lately, so when I saw that you read and commented on my fic so quickly, it really cheered me up! ^^ (Of course, I regret that I couldn't reply sooner...)
As for oneshots, I find that they're easier to write than chapter fics. I'm not big on planning. I just sit down and...write. (And after an unfortunate incident with an attempted mystery novel gone bad a few years ago, I decided that if I ever write a chapter fic, I was going to create a detailed plan first. I tend to stray away from them. >_>") It's no talent, just my way of getting out of more work. ^^;; (But thank you for the compliment, nevertheless!)
Thank you, again! And look forward to more Shizaya fics, too~ ^_^
I really liked this fic, you created a lovely story without making either of them ooc which is complicated I think. You did a great job <33 thanks for such a sweet story for valentines-day :3
whoaaaa <33 that was so adorable! Everything seemed to fit together perfectly, and the characters had nice reactions...<33 It was a nice valentines day fic , one of the really good ones 8D keep writing, i wanna read more of your stuff <3
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Now that that's all said and done:
This little fic was amazing ;; It's my dark, dark secret Okay, maybe not so dark, but me and oneshots just have this thing. I feel like writers always have to work so much harder to make a truly wonderful story in so little space and; I rarely run into oneshots I think are amazing, as I think a writer has to be pretty gosh darn talented to pull them off... you are one such talented writer :]
The characterizations were absolutely perfect, and the pacing was just...!! ;u; Not to mention the way you narrate is simplistic, yet very revealing about what's going on and the emotions behind the actions. Simple yet complex? Haha, I don't know! XD
I guess all I mean to say that this was amazing, and it was a wonderful way to cap off my Valentine's Day <33 Again, welcome to the community, and I hope to be reading many many, many, many!! more of your fics in the future :)
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Thank you for the welcome and your kind words! ^///^
I've been feeling down lately, so when I saw that you read and commented on my fic so quickly, it really cheered me up! ^^ (Of course, I regret that I couldn't reply sooner...)
As for oneshots, I find that they're easier to write than chapter fics. I'm not big on planning. I just sit down and...write. (And after an unfortunate incident with an attempted mystery novel gone bad a few years ago, I decided that if I ever write a chapter fic, I was going to create a detailed plan first. I tend to stray away from them. >_>") It's no talent, just my way of getting out of more work. ^^;;
(But thank you for the compliment, nevertheless!)
Thank you, again!
And look forward to more Shizaya fics, too~ ^_^
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You did a great job <33
thanks for such a sweet story for valentines-day :3
And Happy late such <3
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I'm so glad you enjoyed my fic!
(I love comments~ <3)
Happy late Valentine's Day to you, too! ^-^
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that was so adorable! Everything seemed to fit together perfectly, and the characters had nice reactions...<33
It was a nice valentines day fic , one of the really good ones 8D
keep writing, i wanna read more of your stuff <3
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Thank you! ^^
And! Look forward to more fics, coming soon! xD
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