wow. that was intresting enough. I liked it. This isn't real though....right?And just so you know, you made it sound like you had been at work for a complete half hour. Dork. :)
very good dickerz! i dunno if you meant to do this or not but just a small correction (i am guessing)
He asked me, putting his hand on my shoulder to let me know he was there. I turned around and started*** at him blankly, perhaps drooling a bit I don’t quite remember. He slapped me, I snapped out of it. “Now,” he repeated himself, “what are you doing here?”
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i dunno if you meant to do this or not but just a small correction (i am guessing)
He asked me, putting his hand on my shoulder to let me know he was there. I turned around and started*** at him blankly, perhaps drooling a bit I don’t quite remember. He slapped me, I snapped out of it. “Now,” he repeated himself, “what are you doing here?”
*** do you mean stared?
but yeaa thats all i noticed good job!
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