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Here Comes Santa Claus - part deux - V/L (NC-17)

Dec 28, 2006 10:53

Title: Here Comes Santa Claus
Author: Rindee
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 11,179 (for both parts)
Pairing: Veronica/Logan
Spoilers: Through the end of Season 2.
Summary: AU fic - Veronica goes to Paris, and Logan goes ... elsewhere.

A/N: Written for the Santa Baby challenge at vm_library and cross posted to veronicamarsfic and veronicalogan. Beta'd by the wicked librarian herself, taken_with_you, ( Read more... )

Comments 13

bookjamprincess December 28 2006, 22:51:37 UTC

Smut, angst, and Christmas all in one fic? Wow. Thats ideal. I loved it. Very hot. Very very hot =P

rindee December 29 2006, 06:50:24 UTC

LOL - what would Christmas be without smut and angst?? I'm so glad you thought it was hot, and thanks for the lovely feedback.

la623 December 29 2006, 07:02:09 UTC

OMG! I love you! Have I mentioned it lately? If not, I'm sorry...but I do...really...this was amazing! I mean...it was all angst...then hot...and angsty...I loved the Thanksgiving delivery...so sweet...after all the anticipation of her waiting for him to respond to one of her letters and postcards...and when she's about ready to finally give up, he finally reaches out to her....Loved that part...brought a tear to my eye...then the package....suddenly it wasn't so angsty anymore...it was clever, and cute...when she was with the Salvation Army at the clinic and he saw her...the snark was so cute...then of course when she gets to his room...I love that it didn't start out with all the sex...it got serious and a bit angsty again...I loved it...loved how she put herself out there....that last scene was definitely hot...the last line...too cute! :)

rindee December 29 2006, 14:30:10 UTC

Ohmygod, thank you so much - I was just thinking of you, sweetie, and wondering how you've been doing, and there you are, leaving me wonderful feedback. *grins* How are you?

I'm really so glad you enjoyed this - I struggle to write "angst" and it's certainly not my strong suit, but with these two...there are so many issues to work through...there almost has to be some angst. Logan just can't help himself - he lives to make the big, dramatic gesture. And Veronica has to respond with some covert activity and a little burglary - that's why she's so fun.

Thanks again, and I hope your holidays are happy.

la623 December 30 2006, 01:09:47 UTC

Awww...thank you! I can't believe I've never asked before...but I guess I thought I already had you added, but can I friend you? :) I've been ok. It's been tough without my dad...but surprisingly enough, it's been really good so far. My family's ok...coping...you know. :) Still looking for a job though...that's what's been tough about the holidays was not being able to buy presents. *sigh*...2007 has got to be better right? :) How were the holidays for you?

Stuggle? I didn't see any kind of struggling in this fic! :) But you're right...they're just so messed up....can't be too fluffy or it wouldn't be them :)

If I don't hear from you before then, I hope you have a safe and happy new year! :) Take care!

berry_hearts December 29 2006, 07:21:16 UTC

YAY!
1) I am a Minnesotal Girl!
2) I like French!
3) i LOVE Logan.

Yes this fic was very cute. YAY Christmas!Fic

rindee December 29 2006, 14:34:42 UTC

Yay back at you - I'm so happy you liked this. Even when it's wicked cold outside, Minnesota is stunning and beautiful, and I love French too. As for Logan - who doesn't love Logan? - okay, I know some people don't like him, but I think he's adorable. Thanks for the encouragement.

merci anonymous December 29 2006, 18:41:37 UTC

usually I don't post comment but after this story I have to. So it's was great, and I have to say that your french is excellent, are frenchy? if you could write in french you could read it too, so : j'ai adoré cette histoire, c'était adorable, émouvant et sexy à la fois, bravo vraiment bravo !!
Thank you for sharing!

a little frenchie

Re: merci rindee January 4 2007, 06:37:06 UTC

Merci, vraiment. I wish I was still fluent, because it's one of my favorite languages, and one of the most beautiful, but rest assured I understood - and totally appreciated - your lovely words. C'est une compliment merveilleux.

kimikochan December 30 2006, 21:09:01 UTC

I just LOVED this story! So cute and sweet with just enough angst for balance. 'Cause with these two lovebirds, sugary just doesn't work, right? Oh, and mustn't forget the hotness! LOVED IT!

rindee January 4 2007, 04:31:58 UTC

Wow, sweetie, thanks so much for the praise. *blushes* I'm so happy you loved the story, and the smut too.

'Cause with these two lovebirds, sugary just doesn't work, right? I think you're right, for some reason, I just can't write these two sugary sweet - hot *nods* yes, but there's just too much going on for them to be sappy. LOL. Thanks for commenting.