I liked the x-mas chapter, and I'm so happy it's continuing! I liked the therapy session -- fulfills that wish that the two of them would actually talk to each other. It was nice to see Veronica get past her defense mechanism and actually listen. One thing which threw me a little was the champagne when Logan was coming out of rehab.... Other than that I am definitely enjoying the story -- total hot escapism.
One little thing here: until her heels feet rested on the mattress -- too many feet references.
Thank you so much for the fb - the therapy session was, for me, so difficult to write, because I was sure Veronica wasn't going to cooperate. She finally did, though, and I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for the catch on the editing snafu - I fixed it last night.
As for Logan drinking while on hiatus from rehab - I thought about it, but I cannot imagine being in Paris on NYE and not drinking, and I think Veronica would have given him a pass on the issue, if only for a couple of days. Also, I truly think alcohol is not Logan's real problem, even though his drinking is what got him into therapy. Let's face it, he has a lot of other issues to resolve. LOL. Poor boy.
-grinning- I've got your back, your front, it's kinda like being wrapped up in me... huh?
“I’ve missed you,” he growled, his fingers tripping, step by step, down her spine to cup the curve of her bottom. “Such a bad girl,” he mumbled into her throat, his fingertips etching circles on her bare skin.
It's kinda awesome to start and stop a fic with all kinds of S-E-X! -grinning- And growly!Logan? Ohmygodthehotness. I'm definitely into growly!Logan.
“I know you’re sore. I’m gonna make it better,” he promised, flexing his fingers as she began to quiver and strain.
I'm also slightly weak-in-the-knees for confident!I'm!going!to!heal!you!Logan! ...
Writhing and quivering at the sensation of his teeth on her skin, she groaned loudly and began to suck greedily on his fingertipYou know how much this kills me
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grinning- I've got your back, your front, it's kinda like being wrapped up in me... huh? Um ... you're not complaining, are you? *squints at you* Cuz I'm pretty happy here.
Starting and stopping a fic w/ sex is the only way to go, darlin' - especially w/ growly Logan. God - is it bad that I just want to see him totally dom and *shivers* just a little ... forceful? Mmmm. The thoughts in my head....
And first time blowjob? Soooooooo good! *blushes furiously* I'm so happy you approve - it's a big part of why this took so long to write. Well, that and the therapy. LOL. I really wanted to get it right.
especially nothing dirty, and illicit and quite possibly involving a contortionist’s flexibility. Hmmm, sounds like you know more about Dr. Smith than you're letting on. Wonder why. *smirks* You know the therapy session was actually THE MOST difficult to write - it may have kilt to read, but it definitely almost killed me to write it.
As she finished her sentence, Logan took her hands in his and pried open her fists.
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Do I look like I'm complaining to you? -grinning, nuzzling-
God - is it bad that I just want to see him totally dom and *shivers* just a little ... forceful?
Even worse, is it bad that I want to see you writing him dom and forceful? -grinning- If we're bad... let us be bad together.
Hmmm, sounds like you know more about Dr. Smith than you're letting on. Wonder why. *smirks*
-returning your smirk- Yessss, but I still think a) Dr. Smith wouldn't have said a word, just sat back and watched the two of them and b) would have slapped Veronica somewhere... -points up with a laugh- I know, I know. So much for professionalism!
And I don't really want you dead - on my best day, I can't write it like you can.
Pssssht! We have different styles, that's all. Your writing is incredible... especially your original stuff! It's filled with so much life and character and creativity. Some days, I swear you're bursting with it!
Ha... oh I love the idea of Veronica sneaking in to visit Logan. And I love even more them having steamy sex, and her going down on him and trying so hard to please him
( ... )
When I first started watching VM, part of the hook, for me, was the similarity between Veronica and Sydney Bristow; I love it when Veronica does something incredibly daft and dangerous - it's like candy, mmm, so good.
Not just because of how wonderfully sexy it is because it was so intimate and passionate. You made my day with this - imo, sex is so much better, hotter, whatevah, when it's truly intimate, and I think, underneath it all, these two really know each other.
I don't know why you thought something bad was going to happen in the good doctor's office, she said, tongue firmly in cheek. Yeah, our heroine has some issues of her own - sometimes I think she has more of them than he does - and that's saying something. As for Veronica going off on the "creepy" shrink - I tried to make her behave, but there was no way she was going to sit still and let someone take the lead and "have at" her or her man. She just wouldn't cooperate, *shrugs* what can I say? LOL.
Thanks for all your comments, hon. It means so much to me.
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One little thing here: until her heels feet rested on the mattress -- too many feet references.
Off to part 2....
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As for Logan drinking while on hiatus from rehab - I thought about it, but I cannot imagine being in Paris on NYE and not drinking, and I think Veronica would have given him a pass on the issue, if only for a couple of days. Also, I truly think alcohol is not Logan's real problem, even though his drinking is what got him into therapy. Let's face it, he has a lot of other issues to resolve. LOL. Poor boy.
Anyway - thanks again for reading and commenting.
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-grinning- I've got your back, your front, it's kinda like being wrapped up in me... huh?
“I’ve missed you,” he growled, his fingers tripping, step by step, down her spine to cup the curve of her bottom. “Such a bad girl,” he mumbled into her throat, his fingertips etching circles on her bare skin.
It's kinda awesome to start and stop a fic with all kinds of S-E-X! -grinning- And growly!Logan? Ohmygodthehotness. I'm definitely into growly!Logan.
“I know you’re sore. I’m gonna make it better,” he promised, flexing his fingers as she began to quiver and strain.
I'm also slightly weak-in-the-knees for confident!I'm!going!to!heal!you!Logan! ...
Writhing and quivering at the sensation of his teeth on her skin, she groaned loudly and began to suck greedily on his fingertipYou know how much this kills me ( ... )
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Starting and stopping a fic w/ sex is the only way to go, darlin' - especially w/ growly Logan. God - is it bad that I just want to see him totally dom and *shivers* just a little ... forceful? Mmmm. The thoughts in my head....
And first time blowjob? Soooooooo good! *blushes furiously* I'm so happy you approve - it's a big part of why this took so long to write. Well, that and the therapy. LOL. I really wanted to get it right.
especially nothing dirty, and illicit and quite possibly involving a contortionist’s flexibility. Hmmm, sounds like you know more about Dr. Smith than you're letting on. Wonder why. *smirks* You know the therapy session was actually THE MOST difficult to write - it may have kilt to read, but it definitely almost killed me to write it.
As she finished her sentence, Logan took her hands in his and pried open her fists. ( ... )
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God - is it bad that I just want to see him totally dom and *shivers* just a little ... forceful?
Even worse, is it bad that I want to see you writing him dom and forceful? -grinning- If we're bad... let us be bad together.
Hmmm, sounds like you know more about Dr. Smith than you're letting on. Wonder why. *smirks*
-returning your smirk- Yessss, but I still think a) Dr. Smith wouldn't have said a word, just sat back and watched the two of them and b) would have slapped Veronica somewhere... -points up with a laugh- I know, I know. So much for professionalism!
And I don't really want you dead - on my best day, I can't write it like you can.
Pssssht! We have different styles, that's all. Your writing is incredible... especially your original stuff! It's filled with so much life and character and creativity. Some days, I swear you're bursting with it!
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Not just because of how wonderfully sexy it is because it was so intimate and passionate. You made my day with this - imo, sex is so much better, hotter, whatevah, when it's truly intimate, and I think, underneath it all, these two really know each other.
I don't know why you thought something bad was going to happen in the good doctor's office, she said, tongue firmly in cheek. Yeah, our heroine has some issues of her own - sometimes I think she has more of them than he does - and that's saying something. As for Veronica going off on the "creepy" shrink - I tried to make her behave, but there was no way she was going to sit still and let someone take the lead and "have at" her or her man. She just wouldn't cooperate, *shrugs* what can I say? LOL.
Thanks for all your comments, hon. It means so much to me.
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