Comments | ringoutthebell: Solstice

ringoutthebell

Solstice

Jul 08, 2011 01:25

Solstice
Uruha/Kai
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354words (drabble)
Note: In which Uruha and Kai are seasons :)

( Of seasons and lovers )

Comments 9

heartsyuu July 8 2011, 06:37:55 UTC

Awww. This is really cute. I like the two paragraphs at the beginning, you compared to two of them very well and your descriptions are just wonderful! :D

Thanks for sharing.

ringoutthebell July 12 2011, 04:37:40 UTC

Thank you for reading :)

gratiela July 8 2011, 08:29:42 UTC

I like your idea very much! Somehow I find the descriptions of Autumn and Winter appropriate with Kai and Uruha (or what I can perceive of them anyway)
Beautiful! thank you for sharing!

ringoutthebell July 12 2011, 04:38:52 UTC

Thank you! Kai had always reminded me of Autumn. Winter was a bit tricky as I was really debating on using Aoi instead.

Alas, Uruha wouldn't budge.

Thank you for reading :)

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ringoutthebell July 12 2011, 04:39:21 UTC

delicious popcorn! Thanks for reading :)

atmosphere_zero July 8 2011, 17:23:47 UTC

The descriptions were quite beautiful and touching. Lovely story! ^_^

ringoutthebell July 12 2011, 04:39:52 UTC

Why thank you! I appreciate you taking your time to read it :)

buriedinheart July 9 2011, 06:19:05 UTC

this was quite pretty :) i really love the imagery and the flow of words, its simple yet so engaging.
loved it <3

ringoutthebell July 12 2011, 04:40:14 UTC

Thank you m'dear ^^