A story in four sequences with no actual conclusion

[ringoutthebell]

A story in four sequences with no actual conclusion
Uruha/Kai
PG-13 (language)
Note: Uruai writing challenge :)
Prompt: Here!

Comments

[cateris]

Dude so...I SAVED THIS IN MY MEMORIES THE SECOND I FINISHED READING! OMG!

I lovedloveloved this. What you did with your prompt has been so amazingly beautiful :) It came down like a real awesome surprise for me :D

The moment I started reading I started feeling like watching this really beautiful anime (i LOVE anime). It had something of the quality resembling

that kind of feeling :)

The way you chose these specific scenes, the way their characterization is like for both Kai and Uruha as well as their dynamics. It has something definitely magical and soothing. The kind of story that after you finish reading it you wanna live your life at fullest too :)

Hahaha, I totally loved the way Uruha met with Kai for the first time. As well as the full circle you closed with the “You city boys are all the same,” and ending it with “You country boys are all the same.” You used the differences in personality and facts about Kai and Uruha so beautifully and you totally nailed their dynamic so AWESOMELY! I never thought about Kai/Uruha

[cateris]

“I’m not always an asshole,” Uruha whispered and glanced at him, peripheral vision at its best, taking in the sharp noses and pouty lips.

“I’m cold, Uruha.”omg...so...this piece here? maaaaaaaan...THE FACT THAT YOU MADE URUHA WHISPER THAT LINE! THE WAY THINGS HAPPEN THE WAY THEY DO! THE WAY URUHA IS CHECKING KAI OUT TO SEE HIS REACTION WITH THE CORNER OF HIS EYES! KAI'S LINE!!!!!!! This is I think my THE most favorite part! This moment here? It has so much psychological content and beautiful human behavior and everything. It's a really interesting mature insight in their dynamic and this specific moment you created with this story. You actually made all of this really special - and here I'm referring to the WHOLE fic. I don't think I have ever read before another KU like this :) You definitely have a authorial personality and I'm completely IN LOVE with your KU pairing. You have a certain ability that when someone reads your story we feel like we should make a hot cocoa and cozily sit down on a couch under a blanket feeling content

[ringoutthebell]

....YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! Its 3am here so I will come back tomorrow and tell you how I feel all types of amazing and courage from your comment!

[cateris]

<333

[heartsyuu]

Awww, I love this a lot. I just so happen to have a friend from the city (I'm not really from the country, more like the borderline between country and city ^^) and sometimes I just think the same thing as Uruha.

Thanks for sharingg!

[ringoutthebell]

Thank you for reading :) I've been quite a nomad, so I've been blessed to experience both the country and the city equally. I completely understand why your feelings correspond with Uruha ^^

[ringoutthebell]

Thank you :)

I adore them as well ^^

[ldybastet]

Awwwww... cute! :) I like the "I'm not always an asshole"-line. *grin* Seems like Uruha is the definite seme in this budding relationship. ;)

[ringoutthebell]

Uruha is....well....he's Uruha :)

Thank you heaps for reading!

[misumaru]

Heh, it does have an ending - it just promises something new. ;) Anyway, this was cute, I really liked it! Especially this bit:

“Well…looks like someone has extra money after paying rent this month.”

Kai knows how to use his charm to his advantage, right? XD

(Short coworker is Ruki, right? Aww, I've always thought that he's cute when he cries! :P)