Camp Nano Magor - Chapter 4 - The Spell

Jul 10, 2013 17:31

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kyaraelf July 12 2013, 03:09:27 UTC
Note: I am buzzed so I am not in editor mode. OK, maybe a little editing.

. She learned about the Redanni Arch, the energy source the Magors had worked with to start the Storms. Before it had been destroyed, many had believed that the Redann Arch stood.

Redanni/Redann?

OK, that was awesome. This was the first scene that I remember being a lot like in the original, but I love it.

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calcitrix July 12 2013, 04:24:38 UTC
Whee! Recognizeable, but definitely its own thing.

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rinkafic July 12 2013, 18:32:31 UTC
Oh, hai! Awesome, I'm glad you're reading. I must have screwed up the filters! I'll make sure you have access to the other parts too.

Can't wait to see you again in a few weeks!

*Big Squishy Hugs*

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