Stars Made of Paper (3/7)

Aug 12, 2012 14:13

Genre: AU, non-h/c
Warnings: nothing more hardcore than canon, angst, Justin/OMC
Rating: hate to say it, but PG-13 for miles and miles
Word count: this chapter: 5000
Beta: moonbrightnites
A/N: This fic is for Sakesushimaki <3

Chapter 3 )

my fic: stars made of paper, qaf

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armandyouidiot August 12 2012, 14:32:05 UTC
Well, things sure went to shit. Makes me so sad that Brian doesn't even answer him, ack!

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rinmonsterer August 13 2012, 13:55:50 UTC
They sure did! Isn't it great? :D

Yeah, Brian doesn't often think of himself as beneficial to Justin's well-being.

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lrknow August 12 2012, 15:28:56 UTC
Wow!! read the two chapters in one sitting and they're simply brilliant!!!
I loved the languid pace and the way they're quietly bonding and getting comfortable with each other and then the shit hit the fan... I'm tellin' ya even with your warning of PG13 I'm hooked to your fic :)

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rinmonsterer August 13 2012, 13:58:17 UTC
OMG, thank you so much! :)
It makes me so, so happy that we can still appreciate Brian and Justin doing slow-paced, domestic, non-sexual things. There's not enough fics about Brian and Justin just being friends, they'd be awesome at that.

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shenova August 12 2012, 15:40:37 UTC
Oh dear just when the guys are getting close the shit hits the fan. Now the guys dont live together and Brian is leaving Justin alone as requested by his mum. I am sure that Justin is going to go to Babylon even without Brian.

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rinmonsterer August 13 2012, 13:59:52 UTC
Yeah, things aren't looking so peachy right now, but life goes on, you know? Who knows what's just around the riverbend? (I'd be betting: more angst for Brian, PROBABLY) :D

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britinmanor August 12 2012, 17:44:00 UTC
NOT A CLIFFHANGER?????? WHAT IF JUSTIN SHOWED UP THERE???

And, I hope you get the two of them together quickly - like - NEXT CHAPTER! Am I being too demanding? And I'd like to see them actually TALK about EVERYTHING.

LAST MINUTE EDITS. How well I know about that from betaing all the time! UGH!

Okay... Deep Breath as I impatiently wait :)

Hugs ~ Cathy

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rinmonsterer August 13 2012, 14:03:13 UTC
What? Showed up where?

Well, obviously I can't give everything away, but I'd be thrown out of bjfic if there were no Brian and Justin moments, all the time. :P Wait, TALK? When has Brian ever talked about anything with anyone?

Last minute edits are THE WORST! But they're going well, from my quick appraisal.

Thank you for a lovely comment! <3

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duffy_60 August 12 2012, 19:02:54 UTC
It makes me sad that Brian, in this 'verse, is doing as Jen wants -- again -- even if it might not be what Justin really needs. (did that makes sense?)
I'm working on lack of sleep here.
;-)

later!

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rinmonsterer August 13 2012, 14:05:33 UTC
I think Brian's karma is to be forever doing as Jen wants, in every incarnation and parallel universe, forever :D

Well, I don't think we know what Justin really needs until we see the consequences. (and yes, I think what you said made perfect sense :)

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