Dec 03, 2007 10:55
Lost Souls was the one with Amy and Gaara. Whatever. Found in the hellhole (Quizilla)
Name: Lost Souls
Author: gaarasgothchick
Violations: OOC-ness, Mary-Sue-ness, stupid-ness, Supar Pyschicpwrz *TM*
Gaara's POV
"So Gaara where the hell am I?" You're in a gay club. "your in a forst Forst? WTH? about a mile out of Konoha." "Konoha? Where have I heard that name before...Oh yeah my de- mom Uh, no bitch. The demon mom is MY mom. You got a semi-demon mom. :l told me about it. Its a ninja village in the fire country How the hell is this semi-demon mom supposed to know this? She's in a different frigging **world**. But I'm from a different world how'd I get here? That weasel If it was Japanese it would be "That Itachi girl!" -__- girl! so thats what she ment when she said "I hope you find peace in your new life" Da fuxk? Why would a DEMON mom say something like that?! but why'd she send me here?" You just watched her she seemed to be talking to herself rather then you. "you talk to your self alot don't you?" Kinda like Jugo... "If a woman walks in this room, I'm definately gonna kill her." You say it! "wha oh Gaara hehe sorry forgot you where still here well I must be off bye. That stupid bish sounds like that slore Ekaterina. " She started to walk off but you teleported It's called the frigging Body Flicker jutsu. Watch the show plz. infront O bby, Gaara goes infront of her totally. of her. "why do you want to leave?" 'because I hate humans and want nothing to do with them anymore LOLOL SO KILL GAARA AND URSELF now move." You felt some invisible force aganst you and you were pushed aside. It's her "LOLOL SUPER PZYCIC PWERZ" She started to walk off. "aren't you human to?" she stoped. "Is there something wrong with me hating my own kind especially when they've done nothing but hurt me my whole life? Haha, you copier of Gaara. Since I hate Gaara...>__> *eyes bleed*" "...(she's like me)theres nothing wrong with it...I understand your pain. LOL EMO LURVE" She spun around so she was facing you her face was full of pain and anger. "NO YOU DON'T YOUR JUST LIEING Lieing? TO ME LIKE EVERYONE ELSE!!" Angsty!emo!PMS!Sue! You didn't say anything you were just looking at her eyes they showed the same emptiness as yours "Amy" is a carbon copy of Gaara. Anyone else agree? but they also showed that she was more messed up then you. Actually, the boy in the story "The Boy Called It" is more messed-up than both of these fuxers. "beleave me I understand your pain more then anyone you'll ever meet." "why should I beleave Beleave her Gaara. Beleave her. you?" "tell me your past." "why should I?" "if you do then I'll let you leave." OMG GAARA'S GONNA RAPE HER
Your POV
"(I don't want to tell him my past. No matter how hot he is he's human he'll just judge me like all the others. But why do I sence demon energy in him?) Since when do people think in (__)'s? answer me something Gaara why do I sence demon energy in you?" OH WHOA HES A DEMON!! HOLY SHIT "if I tell you will you tell me your past? This sounds totally like Silence Of the Lambs. Except I love Hannibal Lecter. *squee* " "I might." "...there's a demon inside me whats why.THIS ISH NEW TO ME " You tilted your head and made a evil grin. " what if I told you I'm a demon hunter would you still like to know my past? Kill him, plz. I'll love you more. " His hand twiched but he didn't show any sign of fear. "yes." "(damn scaering him won't work. looks like I don't have a choice LOOK PPL DON'T THINK IN PARENTHESES. NOW STFU ) don't worry I wont kill you I gave up hunting demons three years ago." You walked over to a edge of a pond and sat down. "if you want to know my past then take a seat. Do I smell a sex scene?" He walked over to you and sat down beside you. "...Like I said I'm not from this world. my father abandoned me before I was born and my mother died in child birth.Gaara: OMFG LIEK ME LETS HAVE BUTTSECKS I grew up in a orphanage with out any friends not having a perpose or existence till I was five. Demons are atracted to my power so I've been killing since I was young everyone thought I was evil even when I was killing demons they thought I was evil. Evil evil evil. You try to copy my Hannibal, but you NEVER WILL. O, sorry, I missed you, run-on sentence." "what is your power?" "I can make psychic bombs, blades, and hands thats how I moved you out of my way. She's not a ninja, so she;s not worthy. Kill her? Any way when I was five I killed a demon and a group of men saw me and they started to beat me for it I refused to kill them She can still talk when she's being beaten? O, this is a OOC fic. Nvrmind. because I didn't want to be a monster at the time I thought if I killed a human that would make and just as bad as the demons. But a demon saved me from them and killed them. I didn't know what to think after that. I always thought demons were bad and dispit Dis pit...is the shiznit. all they've done to me humans were good but humans were trying to kill me You say humans are good but they tried to kill you. You make no sense. because I killed a demon to save a little boys life.And you hate humans....?!??! It didn't mater to them how many people I saved I was still evil to them Well don't that seem ok and logical? -_-". Then a demon killed them, saved my life, and treated my wounds I stoped helping humans after that. The demon took me under her wing So to speak...>__> and raised me I thought of her as my mother. O, you mean my semi-demon mother. so I decided that not all demons are bad. I became a demon hunter killing demons WELL WHAT THE FUXK. You said not all demons r bad but you kill them. Stupid bish. and humans that I thought deserved to die. I thought everyone and everything that had ever hurt someone else in any way needed to die. So I killed them. killing gave me some sort of satafaction Gaara-bitch. but three years ago the demon who raised me was killed. BURN After that I stoped killing I realized then that what I was doing was wrong. Gaara-bitch. Those people and demons I killed could have had someone who loved them Gaara-bitch x10 and because of me the ones who loved them are now feeling the pain that I feel about losing my semi demon mother. So for the past three years I've been wandering around without a perpose or a reason to exist. I stayed away from towns and people because everytime I went near someone they thought I was evil and tryed to hurt me. I don't trust anyone any more I've been hurt to many times to trust." You turned to look at him. "there thats my life its been nothing but pain, hurting, and killing." HAHAH EMO GAARA BITCH
Gaara's POV
You looked at her holding her gaze. happily, she turned Gaara into stone. "then we're the same after all. lol no duh dumbass" "how so?" You told her about your past and when you were done the author doesn't get into that but she gets SOOO into her perfect Mary-Sue's demon. *gets knife* she nodded. "yeah I guess we are the same." "so now that you told me your past aare you going to leave?" She looked you in the eyes as if she was digging into your sole She died. Gaara's sole was too sweaty. Plus he has athlete's foot. and then she spoke "I found another reason we're the same." 'whats that?" You answerd her still looking into her eyes. "your sole is as lost as mine." Sadly, Gaara and Amy's sole were cut off by Orochimaru. "you think so?" "yeah" You were still staring at her and she blushed a bit then looked away. "you have a very penetrating gaze. Sign 8,000 of a Mary Sue" "will you stay?" "I think I will." "good.I SMELL BUTTSECKS..that group of men that hurt you what did they do?" "do you want to see?" you nodded and she got up. She took her sweater off and turned so her back was facing you then she pulled her shirt up so it was off her back. OOHH...I was right. your eyes got wide in shock there were whip marks all over her back. You got up and walked over to her. You gently touched one of the marks. She flinched but didn't tell you not to. You traced your fingers over them. The only part you didn't touch was the part that her bra covered. Orly. Gaara's supposed to be a pedo "there's thirty marks in all."What, you were counting you sick fluck? "sick" "see why I don't trust people. Paging Idate Morino." She steped away from you and put her shirt back on right. "I also have one other scare but I'm not going to show you that one." "why?" "because it is my va-jay-jay. *wink* gose across my chest." "oh" you talked with her a bit more then the sun started to come up. "I should head back or Temari will throw a huge fit." "temari?" "my sister." "oh" "will you come back with me?" "no I'm not ging near that village I'll stay here. you will come back right?" "yeah tomarrow." You looked at her she looked like she wanted to ask you something. "do you want me to bring you something?" "no...well yes I haven't eaten in a day and I'm hungry. 4 BLOOD" "fine I'll bring you something to eat." "thanks"
Your POV
You watched Gaara leave and the put your bag full of drugs clothes aganst a tree you lied down and used it for a pellow "what happend to me why was I so willing to talk to him?" Then you fell asleep.
-My past is so sadTT_TT me: crybaby I hate this author. And the person who actually frigging picked this.
... me: SAY SOMETHING DAMN IT The author has PMS, btw
well thats it for now more out soon say goodnight Gaara-kun
Gaara:...goodnight Can you please die?
NNNNNNNOOOOOOO CCCCCCOOOOOOMMMMMEEEEE BBBBBAAAAACCKKK Who would pick this?
... me: I hate you I hate you too.
Well. That sucked even more than the last.
If any MiSTer wants to collaborate with me that would be awesome. ^^ Please?
--Katsu
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