SQUUAAAAAA!!! A NOTE!! hehehehe ... anywho I like this one best so far. But that's just my opinion cause I prefer to read about the physical aspect of it (what happened) then the emotional aspect of it (how you felt). But you seem to only writing about the visual and emotional aspects of the trip. If you want a suggestion, write more blunt (and less sugar coated) querks about the trip, such as getting smoke in your eyes or embers on your skin. But that's why I like this one cause it's less mushy mushy LOL. Can't wait to read the next!
Minor corrections: The filter didn't break until the second round of pumping water, and that was when Bobby and I went because we ran back to camp to ask Micah about it. Also I was still wading in the water when the whole 'pushing Bobby into the hole' thing happened, and I didn't dunk until the next day, but no biggy.
Thank ya! I'll probably go back in the end and fix things up all over the place and thanx for the suggestions :D I did try to be more blunt, however I don't remember many bad things happening - at least this far. Except the water filter broke and the whole trip was foggy lol. Oh and I just remembered something... I should put in there how Micah decided to sleep on some boards by the fire lol. Anyways, thanx again!!! ~Tiff
lol sounds like you guys had fun.. I feel sorry for you with that whole needing to answer natures call thing.. thats kind of funny though the whole hole thing.. lol you weird part animals.. LOL.. I am glad to hear it was an enjoyable experince though..
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Minor corrections: The filter didn't break until the second round of pumping water, and that was when Bobby and I went because we ran back to camp to ask Micah about it. Also I was still wading in the water when the whole 'pushing Bobby into the hole' thing happened, and I didn't dunk until the next day, but no biggy.
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