I have been writting, I swear!
I know that I haven't posted anything yet, but I have been writing. I'm trying to prepare for nanowrimo so I've been trying to write about 2,000 words a day. I've actually been able to do it most days. This weekend I'll have the first bit of a story I've been working on.
Until then, tell me what you think of this piece I wrote in September.
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As constructive criticism...
1. try to break it up into paragraphs
2. maybe a little more description of the wedding or the bride would be good
3. a little more description on the emotions... it's a good start but it's like a tease with where you stop. Put yourself in Hon's shoes. Don't be afraid of embellishment in this case. Metaphors are great and enhance writing, so you could throw one of those in if you're feeling feisty.
Other than that, I wish I would've thought of this myself. Kudos. :)
~Britt
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