Revisit to Hon

[ripter]

 

Comments

[anonymous]

What a transition! It's great! I like the more descriptive imagery and more attention to character background.

(I sound like a wuss, but it choked me up this time... very good job.)

~Britt

[ripter]

Yay! I'm glad you liked it.

As I may or may not have said before, I'm doing nanowrimo this year so I won't be writing anything else except my novel. I still don't have a name for it.

I'll probably post bits of my novel as it progresses, but they won't be nearly as this polished.