Comments | riskofruin: Prison Break ficlet: Reaching Out

riskofruin

Prison Break ficlet: Reaching Out

May 16, 2009 14:28

Title: Reaching Out
Fandom: Prison Break
Rating: PG
Category: gen
Word count: 429
Summary: Alex is hurting
Spoilers: takes place after the end of 4.03 ‘Shut Down’
Disclaimer: not mine

Author’s notes: just a little episode coda to ‘Shut Down’, after that amazing scene with Alex and Lincoln. I just wanted Michael to show some more reaction to Cameron’s death ( Read more... )

ficlet, michael/alex, prison break

Comments 10

belle_mystic May 16 2009, 14:26:53 UTC

I LIKE IT.

It should happen like this.

Thanks.

riskofruin May 19 2009, 00:57:27 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked and took the time to comment!

sdwolfpup May 16 2009, 14:43:18 UTC

Oh I really enjoyed this. I, too, wish there had been more response from Michael about the death of Alex's son. This is a great way it could have gone!

riskofruin May 19 2009, 01:03:14 UTC

I'm so happy you liked it. A lot of the enjoyment I'm getting out of this fandom is thanks to your journal, so it means a lot to me that you commented on this little thing. Thanks!! :)

heeheegifted May 19 2009, 00:37:10 UTC

Lovely!! Very well written and very in character. Nice job :)

riskofruin May 19 2009, 01:16:20 UTC

Thanks! I am thrilled that you found it in character, I tried to keep the mush in check but wasn't sure if it worked ;).

(I keep tearing up when I look at your beautiful icon!)

excalibur_z May 21 2009, 17:15:04 UTC

They should have had this in the actual show! You're great at picking out parts where Alex fans like me is left unsatisfied, and then you satisfy us. Thank you :)

riskofruin May 24 2009, 01:21:00 UTC

I was kind of frustrated with Michael's blank look when Linc told him about Cameron. I know it's Michael's MO not to show too much reaction, but still. And then I found myself writing fic, and now I can't stop, LOL.

Thanks for commenting and I'm very happy you liked it!

flurblewig November 29 2009, 21:32:20 UTC

Eee, that's just lovely. I adored the interaction between Alex & Linc, but there definitely should have been more from Michael -- this filled in the gap very nicely :-)

riskofruin December 10 2009, 21:48:40 UTC

That scene between Alex & Linc could very well be my favourite scene of the entire show ;)

Hee thanks for commenting on this little thing. So glad you like it. It inspires me to finish the longer story I've been working on since May.