Prison Break ficlet: Waiting for Bellick*

[riskofruin]

Title: Waiting for Bellick*
Rating: PG
Category: pre-slash
Word count: 604
Summary: Alex and Michael in the car, waiting for Bellick
Spoilers: everything up to 4.07 ‘Five The Hard Way’
Disclaimer: not mine

Author’s notes: I would have liked that scene with Alex and Michael in the car in ‘Five The Hard Way’ to be a bit longer. Not beta’d (English is not my

Comments

Great work!

[excalibur_z]

This is such a nice story to fill the gap in that actual scene. I loved it. And I'm totally looking forward to your next one on Sona!!

Re: Great work!

[riskofruin]

Thank you! I hope to have the next one ready soon.

[brushed_velvet]

Hmmm, I don't know what made me click on this link cos I stopped reading Michael/Alex fic ages ago but I gotta say I really enjoyed this.

I don't even have a clue about the setting because I only watched up until the end of s3 but this is a lovely moment you've captured here.

And if you hadn't mentioned English isn't your first language no one would notice quite frankly so kudos to you. :)

[riskofruin]

Hee, thanks for commenting. I've seen you around I think. I got late to the PB party and I feel like I have a lot of fics in me right now, but I guess most people have moved on and possibly rightly so *g*.

Anyway I'm thrilled that you liked this! Thanks :)

[sdwolfpup]

Aw, BOYS.

I know I should have gone after Bagwell first, but I thought if I stopped trying to figure you out, even for just a few hours, you’d be gone and I’d never find you again

I really like this, it resonates very strongly with how season 2 went!

[riskofruin]

Thank you!! If push comes to shove I think I'd have to admit season 2 is my favorite season. And I just had to give Alex some motivation to NOT go after Bagwell because really, that's what he SHOULD have done :)

[fbi_shadow]

Yes, yes and yes! You captured them just perfectly, just what should have happened between them while waiting for Bellick..How much I needed this! thank you!!
Oh, and your English - not to worry at all!
Now, I have a problem - I can't wait to read that longer, much longer M/A story you announced!!

[riskofruin]

Thanks! My biggest worry is getting the characterization and grammar right, so I appreciate your comment very much! I'll try and hurry up with the longer story :)

Love it

[belle_mystic]

How adorable Michael look when he's laughing. But he was rarely laugh.

Please write more. Thanks.

Re: Love it

[riskofruin]

Michael's smile makes my knees go weak ;). And Alex's too!

Glad you like the ficlet, thanks! I hope to post more soon.