Your Hearts In A Headlock [2/?]

[rissa_ichigo]

Title: Your Hearts In A Headlock
Author: Rissa
Genre: Drama, Angst
Rating: PG-13
Characters for Chapter 2: Russia, America, Ukraine, and Belarus
Summary: Two Decades after the fall, Russia still feels alone. Driving home late on the eve of his sister's birthday he hits America. Russia soon finds out that he has taken something vital from the young

Comments

[rissa_ichigo]

We shall see....

Yep! It only get's more mysterious....>;3

Yush! X3 They are actually my 2nd fave straight couple! <3

Glad you like it still!

[rissa_ichigo]

First off, that icon is WIN XDDDDDD Ahem....

Alright! Snap, so sorry about my horrid grammar. I hate English so much >_<; Why the hell do we have such a complicated language?

Mwhahaha! Nice you caught on to that! But you will find out in all good time! >:3

Yep! I like the idea of states! It's cute! But I don't believe in M-preg or anything like that with them. They just POOF into existence when the state becomes official! XD

Shoot-crackers! Thanks for pointing that out ^_^; While I intially had America's scars and ribs healed quickly, I forgot about his leg *slams head on desk* Let's just pretend it magically healed as well. XD

[sakerat]

Really like how this is turning out. You most defiantly have my attention!

[rissa_ichigo]

Thanks! >3

[eram_quod_es]

Awwwww. D: America! If you're going to forget everything, at least remember that you're a fully developed teenage male! How's Russia gonna put the charms on you now, eh?

And, pffft. Was Russia going to try and make Alfred think that Ukraine and Belarus and he were Alfred's family? That would've been cute. :3

I'm definitely excited for more of this story! It's certainly an interesting plot, made even more-so by the added twist of America's age confusion. Good job! Also, sorry for the late and unsatisfactory comment. I only now got to read it, and I really shouldn't be because I'm about to head off to college for my first psychology course. EEEEE, I'm freaked. Also, sorry for not replying to anything else! I haven't been on at all this week, though I did see the messages in my inbox.

I'mma roll on the floor now. *tap-dances* Whut.

[rissa_ichigo]

Lmao! XD

Something more devious but no longer. Look out Russia! Iggy is coming! XD

I'm so glad you like this! I'm not much of a good writer compared to everyone else at the community, but I do try! And it's okies for the late comment! I will be starting my 2nd college year in a week or so, so I know I will be busy then! >_<;

[sara_rojo]

oh, wow, I really like what you're doing with this. The plot thickens! What's wrong with America? He seems to have erased everything related to responsibility form his mind (his nationhood and his age, which would force him to hold responsibility). What wa she doing in Russia's neighbourhood? And what will England's reaction be? (pfff, not going to lie, that's what I'm looking forward to the mostXD)
Excellent work with Russia's sisters, I hate it when they disappear off the equation in AmeRus fics, and you also handled their personalities very well. And I lovelovelOVE that you included Canada/Ukraine! I wonder if England's with anyone? hopefully France ^^