I really found this story intriguing (though I hesitated to read it because I do like at least some plot with my porn), and more so after your explanation. I'd be very interested in anything else you might choose to write about this Jensen and Jared--how this scene affects their relationship and their perceptions of themselves, and where their relationship goes. Thank you for sharing this!
I hesitated to read it because I do like at least some plot with my porn
I normally do too. This is my first fic in this fandom (and I'm more than a bit nervous because this was not how I intended to 'come out' as a writer for this pairing), so I can't really point to anything else as an example at this point, but believe me when I say this is not what I normally do. Not that there's anything wrong with it, mind you, it's just, as you say, I usually gravitate towards more plot.
I'd be very interested in anything else you might choose to write about this Jensen and Jared--how this scene affects their relationship and their perceptions of themselves, and where their relationship goes. Thanks! I probably won't write anymore of this verse (part of the reason why I posted all the loose ends that didn't quite make it into the fic), mostly because I already wrote about 10,000 words more than I ever intended to of this story. I do, however, have a couple of other fics already started that I hope to start focusing on now
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I hope my comment didn't sound like I thought you owed your readers anything more; that wasn't my intention. And similarly, I certainly didn't mean to imply I don't enjoy porn! I think you definitely told a story here--it was just in the context of a particularly sex-heavy scene.
I'll look forward to whatever else you do decide to write.
I loved this fic. The power play had my mind working even as I was enjoying the porn. Including your back stories in these notes was great, I found I'd almost applied a whole back story of my own, as I was reading, to interpret the actions - it wasn't a long way from yours, but I loved to see the thought process. Thanks for sharing.
... in the ccomment before. This story (besides beeing hot) got me thinking about Why did Jared what he did, what kind of power plays were playing in the background....
Perhaps you should think about putting this in a big bang with all this info and make it a story.
Re: As I said...ristiOctober 18 2012, 16:11:48 UTC
Hi! Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad it made you think!
At this point, I'm pretty sure (although I'll never say never) that this is all the words I have for this universe. HOWEVER, I do have several other ideas/WIPs on my computer that probably will end up being longer projects (maybe even a big bang!) so I hope you'll like those as well!
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I normally do too. This is my first fic in this fandom (and I'm more than a bit nervous because this was not how I intended to 'come out' as a writer for this pairing), so I can't really point to anything else as an example at this point, but believe me when I say this is not what I normally do. Not that there's anything wrong with it, mind you, it's just, as you say, I usually gravitate towards more plot.
I'd be very interested in anything else you might choose to write about this Jensen and Jared--how this scene affects their relationship and their perceptions of themselves, and where their relationship goes. Thanks! I probably won't write anymore of this verse (part of the reason why I posted all the loose ends that didn't quite make it into the fic), mostly because I already wrote about 10,000 words more than I ever intended to of this story. I do, however, have a couple of other fics already started that I hope to start focusing on now ( ... )
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I'll look forward to whatever else you do decide to write.
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Not at all! And thanks again for reading/commenting!
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I found I'd almost applied a whole back story of my own, as I was reading, to interpret the actions - it wasn't a long way from yours
This is awesome to hear, because that's exactly what I was hoping to achieve! And I'm glad it kept your mind working while reading!
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Perhaps you should think about putting this in a big bang with all this info and make it a story.
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At this point, I'm pretty sure (although I'll never say never) that this is all the words I have for this universe. HOWEVER, I do have several other ideas/WIPs on my computer that probably will end up being longer projects (maybe even a big bang!) so I hope you'll like those as well!
Thanks again for reading and commenting!
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