Comments | river919: Life, Later (4/?)

river919

Life, Later (4/?)

Sep 28, 2009 12:34

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It’s funny sometimes how very undramatic life can be, even if you’d expect otherwise. Uriarte is behind bars, for good, for a very, very long time. Actually his unfortunate mother would have to have to give birth to him 3 times more for him to serve his 4 life sentences. I’d have imagined him going down with a little more bang, they caught him ( Read more... )

pepa silvia fanfiction

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river919 September 29 2009, 17:21:21 UTC

Oh my, was that a dig? It certainly wasn't intended as one by me. *smirk* I personally thought Uriarte getting caught while buying carrots was the best part, but those two lines are a good choice as any. *wink* Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. Enjoy part 5 which is already up, seems I'm on a roll. :-)

swiftlyreloaded September 28 2009, 19:53:49 UTC

friend this was just fabulous.
i agree w/ kalikeca about lovin the dig! LOL

river919 September 29 2009, 17:22:29 UTC

Glad you enjoyed. :-) Thank you for reading & commenting.

selinakris September 28 2009, 20:02:59 UTC

was that some "oh so subtle subtext" I detected there...lol.
loved the ending, had me in stitches. can't wait for the next update.

river919 September 29 2009, 17:25:00 UTC

LOL No, plain maintext, I'd say. ;-) Glad to hear you dig the humour - must confess I laugh myself silly at some of the lines, glad they don't fall flat. Next update is up. Enjoy. :-)

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river919 September 29 2009, 17:28:39 UTC

Not one single Crackwhore Muse here! ;-) Yeah, that's how I see it too: Silvia pregnant with Pepa there. I'm sure Silvia alone would've been adorable pregnant all by herself - because MA is just adorable in any given situation :-), but Pepa in the picture brings just a little bit of a pep to it all. :-) Thanks for reading & commenting.

slayergirl13 September 29 2009, 06:07:24 UTC

great story. I don't usually care for A/U stories all that much, but this is really enjoyable. I love how you have Pepa be giddy about the baby and not just focused on seducing the lovely pelirroja.

Please, keep it coming, I'm looking forward to the girls' night out ;)

river919 September 29 2009, 17:31:12 UTC

Oh, Pepa is focused on seducing the pelirroja. She just has to put into place her smooth operation. ;-) Until then she's just over the moon about soon having a new playmate. ;-) Enjoy the next part and thank you for reading & commenting.