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river919

Life, Later (10/?)

Oct 14, 2009 12:11

10.

Another day at work. I’m sitting at my desk trying to finish writing the reports on a couple of autopsies, reports my father wanted yesterday, but yesterday I accompanied Rita with the little one to the pediatrician, officially at least. It didn’t seem to placate my father as he ranted that Rita was a grown woman who could find her own way ( Read more... )

lhdp, pepa silvia fanfiction

Comments 37

slayergirl13 October 15 2009, 01:40:03 UTC

Excellent chapter, once again. Nice and naughty!

river919 October 20 2009, 08:13:48 UTC

Thank you. Looks like it's gonna be nice and naughty from now on for quite some time. ;-) Thanks for reading & commenting. :-)

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river919 October 20 2009, 08:15:19 UTC

It is a grand word, isn't it? Besotted. I'm a fan of it too. :-) Glad you enjoyed last part. Next part's in the making. Thanks for reading & commenting. :-)

junebuggy01 October 16 2009, 18:45:46 UTC

RIVER!!! OMG OMG OMG! This is sooooooooo hot and awesome and hot and wonderful and hot and brilliant and hot and funny and hot! Did I mention it was hot?

And Pove?! Great! The "Sold" line got me! I laughed like an idiot. xD can't wait for the next part.

river919 October 20 2009, 08:19:12 UTC

You forget to mention it was hot. *pouts* Oh, you didn't. *wink* Glad you enjoyed. I'm still gonna tease ya for several chapters that it's not DL-chair-action-time yet though. *grin* Next part won't be involving any chairs either, sadly. I can say it might involve a thin mattress though. Maybe, could be... if it doesn't rain here. *grin*
Thanks for reading & commenting. :-)

booglebee October 16 2009, 20:21:00 UTC

I LOVE this story sooooooooooooOOOOOOOooooooo MUCH!!
Like really really really!
I just love the plot and how its going, and ahh the chemistry between them is just sizzling! ...of course! But you write it so well.

But yes, I knew, I just had the gut feeling the police was gonna be someone they knew, and oh Pove. Geez...
but so damn funny!

Loved it.

river919 October 20 2009, 08:21:07 UTC

LOL I believe you, you REALLY like the story. :-) It's LHDP, interruptions can not NOT happen. ;-) Glad you liked. Hope you enjoy the rest. Thank you for reading & commenting. :-)

booglebee October 20 2009, 08:23:05 UTC

I get a bit too excited when I comment sometimes. Ha..ha...eh.
but yes, looking forward to the rest. :)

river919 October 20 2009, 08:24:37 UTC

I like excited comments, they are the best. Means the story got to people a little bit. So keep up the comments. :-)

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bigmarianfan October 16 2009, 21:00:37 UTC

AWSOMELY HOT and funny..I loved when Silvia said "off, take it off Pepa"!

river919 October 20 2009, 08:23:22 UTC

LOL Well, who can blame ya? ;-) Everybody should like a topless Silvia. Glad you liked it & thank you for taking the time to comment, BMF. :-)