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river919

Life, Later (12/?)

Nov 10, 2009 21:53

12.

I take out my trusty Harry Potter notebook, with the colourful covers and the fountain pen, recently filled with red ink, and go over the pages of my most urgent mission: SEDUCE THE PELIRROJA! It’s now high time to implement Phase 2: GET ME/US LAID aka MAKE SWEET LOVE TO THE PELIRROJA. I turn to a blank, pristine page and put down the title ( Read more... )

pepa silvia fanfiction lhdp

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swiftlyreloaded November 11 2009, 22:01:16 UTC

what the hell? Pepa running off in a hot makeout session w/ la pelirroja??? hmmm talk about complexities WOW river you REALLY peaked my interest w/ this chap.

river919 November 12 2009, 00:19:05 UTC

Glad I peaked your interest with the chapter. :-) Yeah, sounds insane: Pepa running when she could continue just making out with Silvia - them damn inner voices, how they can spoil everything. ;-) Thank you for reading & taking the time to comment. :-)

junebuggy01 November 12 2009, 01:00:53 UTC

LOL! Okay, so I've been waiting for this chapter since like.... I dunno, what was it your third or fourth chap, I'm unsure but a long time...They finally get in the chair. FINALLY get in the fucking chair and Pepa starts to battle with herself?! HERSELF, River?! I was like, "Oh, fuck this is hot! My dreams of DL chair_smut is finally coming into fruition!" And instead of fruitioning, she vomits... LOL ( ... )

river919 November 12 2009, 08:20:58 UTC

lol So, I counted the o's, and as far as I can tell, you reached the necessary quota. Congrats! :-) Aww, bad River deprived you of the DL chair smut. *snicker* Yeah, wasn't that hilarious? No one to stop them except a natural catastrophe and Pepa stops herself. *smirk* But I promise they'll always have fond memories of the time they made in his chair... except the vomit episode, of course, and they'll sooner or later TRY AGAIN, hoping for a happier ending. ;-) Now that I gave ya some hope and ensured your continued reading of the story in the hope that HOPE becomes reality, I don't feel so guilty anymore. Whew! ;-)
Thanks for reading & commenting, buddy. :-)

lovelyafterglow November 16 2009, 18:43:35 UTC

Sorry for taking so long to comment...

This story is SO funny. It seriously puts a smile on my face every time I read a chapter. This really quirky sense of humor really comes through your writing, and it's just awesome.

Keep 'em coming, river!

river919 November 24 2009, 10:36:27 UTC

No problem, thanks for taking the time to read & comment. :-) I'm happy you enjoy the wacky sense of humour. :-)