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river919

Life, Later (14/?)

Nov 25, 2009 12:34

14.

Sara left. Good thing too, because I almost bitchslapped her. And that would’ve been wrong, it’s wrong to hit children. Now, when it comes to certain adults, that’s a whole ‘nother thing. Now where did I put that full box of bullets? Another knock on the door. I check my gun, satisfied it’s got a full magazine, put it back into the holster ( Read more... )

lhdp, pepa silvia fanfiction

Comments 13

pepsilove64 November 25 2009, 11:44:59 UTC

Thanks for the update, that was so good. You sure did make me smile again. Silvia having places to be and people to maim lol
AWESOME chapter, more soon Please

river919 November 26 2009, 09:32:58 UTC

You're welcome, glad you enjoyed. :-) Yup, Silvia doesn't mince words. *chuckle* Thanks for reading & commenting. :-)

junebuggy01 November 25 2009, 13:29:51 UTC

River? I don't know how you manage to crack me up the way you do with your updates! But Ishould have known better than to read your update, I'm quite sick and have a horrible cough and your chapter made me cough terribly with laughter. xD I almost DIED! (Over dramatic much? xD)

No, but I loved the whole Curtis bit and his moustache! That was friggin hilarious! Armpit on your upper lip?! *Snickers* Or the description of that douche's son that she's going on a date with? That made me crack up! *Sighs* I totally love your story, buddy o pal! :D

river919 November 26 2009, 09:38:37 UTC

Sorry to hear you're sick again. :-( Really sorry the story almost killed you. ;-) But hey, what a way to go, huh? ;-) Sure, it wasn't death by smut, but still... ;-) Hope you get better soon.
Yup, can't help but pick on Curtis at times, I'm still pissed he survived four bullets, and Silvia couldn't survive one. :-( That and he molested the pelirroja when he wanted that threesome, and didn't get decked by Pepa, so he's getting his due in this story. *evil grin*
Glad you love the story. Thanks, buddy. :-) Speedy recovery & Happy Thanksgiving. :-)

av8rwinn November 25 2009, 16:44:50 UTC

yay! awesome

river919 November 26 2009, 09:39:31 UTC

Glad you liked. :-) Thanks for reading & commenting. :-)

swiftlyreloaded November 25 2009, 16:49:09 UTC

river friend you had me laughing SO hard. This fic is SO "AWSOME" ha ha don't stop w/ the fun it's TOTALLY APPRECIATED!

river919 November 26 2009, 09:42:34 UTC

Happy it's appreciated & even more that it makes people laugh. :-) I don't intend to stop anytime soon, mainly because it's so much fun writing and there's lots of stuff still to be said, if I only could become serious for a moment and actually move the story forward. ;-) Thanks for reading & commenting. :-)

ponyo08 November 25 2009, 19:18:22 UTC

*Read, enjoyed (SO much), now comments belatedly*

This half-AU series is TOO GOOD! Just read all 14 chapters in one go. Wonderful stuff ~ sweet, sexy, absolutely clever & hilarious :-D. Canon!LHDP, dear, i think you're pwn'd. I would love to have seen this version on TV(or my computer screen, rather) instead!

Huge 'thank you' and kudos on this fantabulous fic of yours, river919.

river919 November 26 2009, 09:50:59 UTC

lol Glad you enjoyed it so much. :-) Hey, you never know, some TV channel might want to produce it some time. ;-) Thanks for taking the time to read [all 14 part in one go!] & commenting. :-)