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The Chosen One, Part II

Apr 19, 2010 00:12

Prompt: #46 (see master prompt list).
Pairing: None; House/Wilson friendship.
Category: Hurt/Comfort
Rating/Warnings: R, for graphic description of child abuse (nonsexual)...spoilers for "The Social Contract" of Season 5.
Words: This part: 3,760 (6,780 in all)
Summary: When Wilson's estranged Uncle suddenly passes, Wilson is forced to remember a ( Read more... )

sickwilson fest, wilson, house

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rivercrossing2 April 19 2010, 15:54:40 UTC

*relieved* I'm so glad! That really means a lot, considering how much effort I put into this thing (6,000+ words might be easy for some, but for me, it's no easy feat when House and Wilson are involved).

I'm glad that their finding something else in common---however painful---and House's acceptance of the situation touched you. I like to paint House in a more approachable light when he's with Wilson...it was incredibly hard to balance that and keep House in character...though it seems like I may have just pulled it off! :)

Finding your comment helped make my morning.

almightyspaz April 19 2010, 21:07:12 UTC

Ooh, I enjoyed this. I especially love how you wrote House.

rivercrossing2 April 19 2010, 21:21:18 UTC

Thanks! I appreaciate that so much! BTW, Your icon makes me smile...(though it also kinda freaks me out)

thelonemascot April 19 2010, 21:07:57 UTC

I enjoyed this story, I really liked how supportive and understanding House was to Wilson. You wrote both Wilson and House in character very well ( ... )

rivercrossing2 April 19 2010, 21:20:45 UTC

I'm not upset by that at all...I didn't have a beta, so I risked these kinds of mistakes that (unfortunately) I didn't notice myself before I posted. *headdesk*

I'm glad you pointed those things out...or I might not have caught it. (I should just say 'suite' instead of 'tux', shouldn't I?) And yeah, there's a couple of things I could just do away with that should have got axed on the cutting room floor. Hey: maybe I should sign you on as my beta! (if you don't mind that is...)

thelonemascot April 19 2010, 21:31:52 UTC

Whew, good...thought I'd scared you off for a second there. No, I don't mind being a beta. I'm always happy to help.

....and it's suit, not suite. GAH! *rips off editor cap* That's enough out of you!

rivercrossing2 April 20 2010, 02:41:32 UTC

LOL! No you didn't scare me, silly...and thank you very, very much!! :)

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wilsonlicious April 20 2010, 02:32:24 UTC

So glad that House was there to help our Wilson through everything! This was wonderfully written.

rivercrossing2 April 20 2010, 02:40:40 UTC

Awww thank you!! :) *friends*

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rivercrossing2 April 20 2010, 23:05:39 UTC

I appreciate that very much. :) Thanks!