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Jonas Brothers: Sugar

Feb 19, 2010 19:44

Title: Sugar
Rating: Er. There's some language, but nothing else.
Summary: He has sugar in his eyes.
Beta'd by author_abz , my besty-best.
A Nikki-Note: LOOK. I know it's not explicitly stated, but it's Kevin/Nick, okay? Just go with me.

( if it doesn't break your heart, it isn't love )

kevin/nick, jonas brothers, romance, angst

Comments 10

bananahater336 February 20 2010, 09:00:17 UTC

This is beautiful, a little bittersweet, but the idea of knowing it's wrong and wanting it anyway, and taking it despite its wrongness is really pleasant, especially since it ended well. I love the description of Nick as chocolate, and I love that his smile is "soft and sure" because it really seems to fit with Kevin's insecurity about the affair. <3
Gah. So lovely. You need to write more, dear. Just sayin'.

riverdancefics February 20 2010, 23:17:52 UTC

Your comments always make me so happy. I'm glad you liked it and I will certainly try to find more time to write. :)

author_abz February 21 2010, 02:05:20 UTC

Oh, I get it now. That last part was the prayer. *is a silly Abby* unless I'm wrong, and then I'm really, really stupid.

This is really sweet, and adorable, and I like it. A lot.

but "breathe" is still not spelled "breath"

riverdancefics February 21 2010, 02:12:46 UTC

No, you're right. It's a prayer.

THANK YOU!

I could only get your corrections to open in notepad, not word, so the color didn't show up... I'll fix it.

author_abz February 21 2010, 02:47:23 UTC

Go me. Success is mine! *does a little dance*

You are most welcome.

Ooooooh. That makes sense.

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riverdancefics February 22 2010, 14:59:24 UTC

I know, I left it pretty open-ended. If I'd called it Joick, I'd probably have more reviews...

Thanks for commenting! You're so sweet!

asm613 February 22 2010, 10:46:23 UTC

Read your note in summary about reviews. For myself_I don't like to read angst and kevin/nick aren't my favorite--so I didn't read--but you said you wanted to know--so there you go---good luck.

riverdancefics February 22 2010, 15:16:05 UTC

Gee, THANKS.

ditchthistown February 27 2010, 20:44:27 UTC

Oh my goodness... I didn't expect such a sweet and perfect ending. I love the way you write. It's kinda - different from normal, and i like it a lot ^_^ <3

ETA: lmao, um, just to say it to say it, I totally thought this was Joick, so, but either way it's still awesome!

riverdancefics March 1 2010, 00:25:35 UTC

Thank you so much!