Comments | riyku: fic: Love Makes Monsters

riyku

fic: Love Makes Monsters

Apr 04, 2016 23:55

Title: Love Makes Monsters
Genre: Sam/Dean
Rating: nc-17
Word Count: 1700
Notes: A Crimson Peak AU. Written for this prompt over at spn_masquerade. Warnings for violence and past underage. Many thanks to dugindeep for helping me out with my whoopsies and assuring me that this makes sense for folks who haven't seen the film ( Read more... )

spn_masquerade, fic: sam/dean, rated: nc-17

Comments 9

l487 April 5 2016, 04:04:08 UTC

Hey, OP here. I just wanted to thank you again. I couldn't have asked for a better author to fill this, and you wrote one of my favorite fills of this round. You deserve all the accolades in the world because this story is spectacular. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

dancing_adrift April 5 2016, 05:05:35 UTC

well, shit O.O I know nothing of Crimson Peak...and yeah, this made sense. Creepy, horrifying, gorgeous sense. O.O Damn. All I can do is swear about it, apparently, lol. *that's a good thing* Fuck, you can write. <3

sammichgirl April 5 2016, 14:03:15 UTC

I've not seen Crimson Peak, but now I feel like I should. I fear it won't hold a candle to this fic though, because this is the stuff of true beauty right here.

runedgirl April 6 2016, 03:28:21 UTC

Damn, but you can write creepy! And still have me loving these boys :)

cherie_morte April 8 2016, 01:49:45 UTC

Their father also died that day, although it took his body years and a carefully aimed crowbar to finally realize it. - You had me at this line right here.

Dean busts through the door like a triumphant hero in some old-timey western, bow-legged swagger and road dust on their father's leather jacket. - Okay, but this is the most Dean description of Dean to ever exist, regardless of what universe it's in.

I fucking adore that Sam doesn't bother to learn their names anymore, that he did for FOUR and has LONG SINCE given up. What a chillingly blase' way to give an idea of HOW MANY FUCKING TIMES THEY HAVE DONE THIS YAAAAAS.

You told me there was a line you snuck into this story for me specifically. I want you to know I read this on the bus with Sous on Tuesday (I know, and only commenting now, I'm the worst) and I got so excited when I reached the line, I turned to her and I was like, "THIS IS IT THIS IS MY LINE." It's this one, I know it is ==> and Sam's slutty cock immediately gets hard and sticky in his jeans.

The women Dean brings ( ... )