Comments | riyku: fic: Mercy

riyku

fic: Mercy

Apr 07, 2016 19:27

Title: Mercy
Genre: Jared/Jensen
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1900
Notes: Warnings for serial killing and sibling incest. Written for salt_burn_porn and juice817's prompt and do no harm. Huge, huge thanks for blackrabbit42 for having my back on this one.

Summary: There's nothing Jensen wouldn't do for his brother.

( Mercy )

fic: j2, rated: nc-17

Comments 13

cherie_morte April 8 2016, 01:28:22 UTC

You and this are magnificent. I knew it would be as soon as you told me what you were doing, but holy crap. JENSEN JUST COMPLETELY FOLDING AT ANYTHING JARED EVER ASKED FOR. The little details--like the tummy gurgling, oh god. The game they play where Jared's manipulating Jensen only that's not really what's happening at all because he wants to do what he's doing to bribe Jensen and Jensen wants to give in, bj or not. And that you slipped in there the seeming throwaway about how Jensen can't watch sometimes--that seems so small but is so big, shows just how much this would repulse Jensen if it wasn't what his baby needs so he doesn't even acknowledge what would be his disgust at it except for turning a blind eye every now and again.

THEN LINES LIKE THIS: There's no cure that won't leave Jared a phantom of the person he is now, that won't make it so that Jensen can only see him during visiting hours once a week. A room without Jared in it isn't a room where Jensen wants to be, and if that makes Jensen as sick as his brother, so be it. ( ... )

lavishsqualor April 8 2016, 04:58:48 UTC

Goddamn, but if this wasn't perfection. I'm just in love with everything you built here, their back story, their massive love and their need for each other. How they're making it work. Super hot and captivating and really just so gorgeous.

peepingdru April 8 2016, 05:57:57 UTC

amazingly amazing in every way...<<<33333

amberdreams April 8 2016, 08:37:51 UTC

Great descriptions, so much unhealthy love that you can't help rooting for them but Oooh that last little exchange did me in!

blackrabbit42 April 8 2016, 13:26:59 UTC

Sorry I couldn't be there until the very end bb, but you knocked it out of the park, as always. Those last lines, I didn't know they would be at the end, but when I read them where they were yesterday, I thought, she can stop this fic anywhere, so long as those are the last lines. And, oh, yes. Perfect.

Jensen's always going to be able to carry him

making noises like he's talking in his sleep

And dear lord, Jared licking Jensen's bellybutton.

<3 <3 <3