Comments | riyu_riya: Diverted, Part 5

riyu_riya

Diverted, Part 5

Apr 11, 2008 17:10

Rating: PG
Pairing: Akihiko/Minato
Spoilers: None

( Diverted, Part 5 )

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riyu_riya April 14 2008, 21:52:11 UTC

Definitely no such thing as laughing too much. Not in my world.

Hopefully Akihiko and Minato are learning that lesson too. ; )

youji_lulu April 14 2008, 11:05:58 UTC

The beautiful smile hit Akihiko right in the gut. He had a sudden, nearly uncontrollable urge to brush the hair back off of Minato's face. The hand in his lap trembled with the effort of not moving. --> this really made me go to lala land XDDDD so cute

raffi April 14 2008, 11:50:19 UTC

Riyuuuuuu!~ You are back! Oh, you're finally back! :3

Great chapter! And I can totally see that charming Minato's face *_*

riyu_riya April 14 2008, 21:50:06 UTC

Sadly, the TotallyAdorable!Minato part I told you about earlier had to be dropped. Blame Akihiko for stealing the POV for himself. Maybe I'll be able to use it in a different story later though.

raffi April 15 2008, 09:39:54 UTC

Ohhh~ It's sad ;^; But anyway, I think Minato turned out to be a total cutie in this chapie! <3 If I were Akihiko, I couldn't control myself.