After Some Months

[rk_sawyer]

I’ve got a typewriter with the letters spelling LOVE ripped out

Comments

[anonymous]

Nice poem. particularly like how everyday life events connected to lover has an effect on persona.

THe last line of every stanza, is it suppose to be ironic? (ie. persona saying that he/she fine but in fact he/she is not)I'm not, for some reason, that convinced that the persona is really "fine". The very mechanics of writing a poem based on things that remind the persona of his/her lover suggests that persona is not yet over the lover yet.

[rk_sawyer]

How perceptive, though I wonder if you're attributing your own feelings a little to my work. Let's not be too coy about it, shall we?

[final_argument]

BOYS BOYS: TRIALS are comming, i think it might be time to stop thinking about being coy and start thinking about being prepared?