Comments | rk_sawyer: Rather derivative

rk_sawyer

Rather derivative - But anyway.

Aug 21, 2005 14:23

The noise from the restaurant still ringing in my ears, I ( Read more... )

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meelijane August 21 2005, 08:41:25 UTC

This confuses me a little, but I really like the imagery.

anonymous August 27 2005, 06:31:43 UTC

*grins* nice to see Huxley still inspires you

Quite well captured though. esp the primates :)

anonymous December 12 2005, 01:02:50 UTC

Very insightful.
The second half with the dual narration is really effective.
Make it longer, and I'd certainly buy it...

rk_sawyer December 15 2005, 08:21:39 UTC

Thank you.

Since this, I have changed it into a play form, and added a little more. I might post it; but I'm not a big fan of people posting big things on their LJs. I know I usually don't want to read them, anyway.

send it to me? anonymous December 17 2005, 16:49:00 UTC

I think it's wonderful that you have made it into a play, I really enjoy reading plays because for me they come alive in my minds eye a lot more vividly.

If you like, you can send it to me for feedback. I'd love to read it, and anything else you want opinions on.

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