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May 19, 2007 14:35

Her face was twisted, her voice forced out with her breath. A long black nail head stuck out at an angle from the pale fleshy top of her foot, a small amount of blood forming around the puncture.

“Ken … Ken”, she stammered ( Read more... )

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anson_in_london May 19 2007, 18:14:22 UTC
Look; I love you and all; and this is yet another great example of your literary finesse,

BUT.

Completely too close to the last post. As in time not content.

You’re loosing your ambiguity man.

Did I just say ‘man’?

Yikes.

‘Yikes’!?

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