Tension Rising (Part 2)

[rkowhore79]

Author: Rkowhore79
Title: Tension Rising (Part 2)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Centon
Summary: Randy lives a very secret and very dark life. Question is, can he trust John to be a part of it?
Warnings: Oh there will be blood...
Disclaimers: Randy isn't really as dark and depraved in real life as I make him out to be in this fic. Or at least I don't think

Comments

[janedoe86]

You continued this! Great job Bella, this was so well written it actually gave me goosebumps. I love your style to write, this was just pure perfection.

Can't wait for more! (And this is totally going into the "memorable entries" box)

[rkowhore79]

awww, thank you! oh most definitely i'm continuing with this..sometimes i like to just write a whole fic at once and then sometimes i drag them out into series..like this one;) i dunno. i just find like a stopping point and want to end it right there before going on to write the next part. so that's what i'm doing.

just starting on part 3 now. oh wow! that's awesome *beams* perfection?? memories?? i'm blushing:) so glad you're enjoying this. especially since not much has happened so far...but it will. don't you worry! Frog should worry, though...;)

[janedoe86]

There's just something about a bad, dark side of Randy I love so much.

Sometimes there doesn't need to be instant action, I love how the story keeps building, and well I think the title says it all better :D

Perfection, that this is.

[rkowhore79]

mmm, tell me about it! bad ass evil randy is smokin' HOT! he really is. as if he couldn't get ANY hotter..shit!

oh good! that's what i'm going for with this one, most definitely!

awww..just like mah bb:)

[rkowhore79]

O_O oh myyy! your compliments are always so flattering, they really are:)
i know this part was pretty short but i figured that that was a good stopping point. i'm def trying to raise the tension level in this so i'm glad that it's coming across as such and that the build up is working. that's what i'm going for but that's prob gonna mean short parts. oh well..i like this style of writing and i don't want to rush it by any means.

can you?? really?? it makes me so happy to hear that cuz i wasn't quite sure if that was coming across as intensely as i wanted it to in this part. i should have spent more time on randy selecting the blade and sitting there in the car waiting for his prey to show...i dunno. i might have rushed this part too much.

alrighty, well i'm just working on it now. i might stop in a bit, though, if i can find a feed for the ppv. def not buying it this time!

thank you again for your wonderful comments. they always make my day!!

[rkowhore79]

omggggggg breaking point!!! did you watch it yet??!!! i swear, it's like they read my fics or something!!! john?? handcuffed and crucified???? Scream For Me, much??!!!! omg,...the whole thing was just so gd hot, this fic is just gonna write itself!!!!

[planningmyxcape]

i squealed when i saw that the next chapter was up!!! :) equally as amzing as the first one!! randy is such a fucking badass :) poor john though...he has no idea what he has gotten himself into...i can't wait for the next part :)

[rkowhore79]

that's awesome! thank you so much. i'm so glad you are enjoying this and want to read more! that means the world to me as a writer. it's so thrilling when people want to read more of your work. it makes me want to keep writing.

isn't he??? guhhhh and is it weird that i can so see him sitting in that car, waiting for some guy so that he could slice and dice him?? lol oh randal..you sexy mutha fucka you.

and john. yes. poor lil naive john....whatever willl he do???

[planningmyxcape]

seriously!!!! can SOOOOO picture him doing this shit lol :)

[rkowhore79]

good!! than i'm doing my job:)

[teddysbabymama]

Perfect twin fic is perfect. As usual

[rkowhore79]

h haaaa onyd! i know it is! but this is..a different randy. a randy that doesn't conform to the masses and who doesn't pander to them either. yeah..this randy hates that fuckin' move and would sooner drive rusty nails into his opponents eyeballs that give them the 'ol are.kay.oh

omg, who is this??!! twin? twin is that you?? *looks around* i don't see any eyebrows so it must be you! but it doesn't sound like you! you want a bloodbath?? frog squashing?? no, no this can't be right. have i corrupted you

[teddysbabymama]

lol i had to!! i couldn't just keep it to myself. i went "*gasp* Oh no she did NOT say he hated it!" blasphemous! but yeah it fit perfectly into the fic.

and hey now!! would you rather me...NOT want this fic!? Hmph! i tell ya. i can never win. damned if i do,damned if i dont! lol! and youre right. i DONT have eyebrows on right now. fuck it. i dont need em.
you've def corrupted me. just as long as, like i said, randy doesn't kill JOHN or anything. lol. and it doesnt sound rushed at all. its fantastic!

mmm..cod. you just had to say that didn't you? *fap fap fap* in fact. im looking SO forward to that match. even though we know teddy's making cod tap out in a bathroom stall RIGHT NOW. hot! and just for that, you get a nice, shiny, happy cod icon :)

[rkowhore79]

yea, randal here is still..wwe randal. but with a twist. a really, really twisted twist;) ugh. so hot.

oh nooooo no! i didn't mean it that way! come back! come backkkk to meee! baby come back! lol
ha! i didn't even know that, just took a wild guess that you prob didn't put them on just to walk around the house all day by yourself. i still want to seeee damn it!

:( i ignore this whole paragraph. i still dun like it. no sirrr:( not one bit.

got any leads on a stream yet? i just asked scarlett since she had that really good one ppv before ss...

[whowatchesnadia]

I think this is the first time a fic has succeeded in giving me goosebumps. Well done!!

the emotions are just perfect and... gah, I don't know anymore words. :D *iz speechless*

[rkowhore79]

get out! really? that's awesome! and means that i am doing my job..*evil laugh* or that randy is...;)

speechless is good..i'll take speechless! it's better than having negative things to say:)