My first slash fic ever!!

[rkowhore79]

I recently tried my hand at writing my first Centon fic.  I don't know if it's any good or not..so please let me know!!  I'd love some feedback on this one!! Negative or positive. But if it IS negative...PLEASE be gentle! I'm a slash writing virgin!!

Author: Rkowhore79
Title:  The Champ ALWAYS Cums First
Pairing: Orton/Cena
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Plot

Comments

[mrssammycena08]

yum. i want randy so bad!! that was hott!! love centon!! yum yum!! =]

[rkowhore79]

my first fic!!! awwwwwww, this brings back memories...ok, you are being just too kind to me today, reading all my fics! thank you! it means so much!

[theoneandonlylj]

And he would, too. All those intense stares in and out of the ring. Slowly undressing John with his eyes. Silently telling him, "As soon as this match is over i'm gonna take you backstage and fuck the shit outta you." Sometimes John got so hot and bothered and wanted Randy right then and there that he'd fake an injury just to be able to leave the arena and engage in passionate sex with the younger man. <---sly thing John is!!! dont blame him though!

"The man was a masterpiece." THAT IS SO TRUE!!!

"He was the devil. He was an angel. All rolled into one sexy, make you cum in your pants with just one look, body."

Pretty much sums it up right there!

Okay so "Hear Randy begging John to stick his dick in HIS ass. But he never would. The arrogant prick. I WANT THAT NOWWWWWWW!

So I am not amused with Randal's actions. He was kinda an asshole.

Also....that was some HOT porn...I had to stop and look away cause um....I couldnt handle it! no lie.