The second part to my first ever fic!!!

[rkowhore79]

Ok, I wrote all day trying to finish the second part to my first ever Centon fic.  So without further ado...here it is.  A bit rushed because I was trying to get all of my thoughts and ideas out before I completely forgot them...LOL  Anyway, let me know what ya think!!!!

Author: Rkowhore79
Title: Who's the Bitch Now?
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Cena/Orton

Comments

[rkowhore79]

i know!! wasn't he?? i didn't want to do that to poor randy:( but the story just kind of went in that direction! LOL i'll make it up to him in another one, i promise! LOL

[mizzmurderx]

Yay! It let me read this one. Lol.
I loved it. Something about Randy being completely helpless is just so hot!
Wow. You did awesome. Can't wait to read the next part (:

[rkowhore79]

Thank you!! Glad you liked it!! It must be because I said the other one had explicit adult content in it and forgot to mark this one as having it as well:) oops!!! I'll try changing that first and you tell me if you can read the other one. The one you read was Part 2. I'll change the status of Part 1 and let me know if you can see it. If not, I'll email it to you. But that's it for that story. I'll have to start a new one sometime soon!! But thank you soooo much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I had a lot of fun writing them!! I hated having to make poor Randy get fucked up like that...but you'll see when you read the first part...i kind of went down that path and had to finish it!! You need to read Part 1 to understand!!

[ihearthbk]

:) Awesome job!! John was a meanie in this one though! haha
But it's okay as long as you make it up to Randy like you said you would! LOL When is the next one?? I can't wait to read it!

[rkowhore79]

not sure yet. i have company right now and tomorrow leaving for orlando..and tuesday april 1st is my son's bday.....so maybe sometime next week if i get the time and an idea....!!!! i'll let you know!

[kirakira_luxury]

Ok, I read the stories and I have to say that you are by far the most graphic writer I have ever read fictions of. And this is meant as a compliment.

I absolutely love your writing style ♥ If you keep going like that, I don’t understand why you don’t get 50+ comments saying: “Woah, yeah! That’s it!”

Oh, I’m so glad I discovered this fandom :3

The first story was really good and the slash-godess blessed it. Yes
The second story was a bit harsh, but you warned me. I liked it but then John took this knife out and did…yeah…nasty things. I have to give you the credit, reading this made me uncomfortable and not much writers can catch the feeling of a moment like this.
So, the end wasn’t pretty but this was planned and fit the story very well. I’m just more a fan of fluff or slash without that much pain :D
To sum it up: I liked this one as well but then end was … evil.
Evil!John is still sexy.

And thank you for adding me, I added you back :D

[rkowhore79]

wow thank you! yeah..i guess i don't really get a lot of comments cuz i don't have a lot of people on my flist!! LOL oh well..i am really proud of both stories. i had never even heard of "slash" before i joined LJ a few months ago. i started reading the stories and thought they were funny/different/sexy/hot etc etc..i don't know what the hell possessed me to start writing them as well..but i did and it was actually kinda fun. i don't write often, though..only when i feel a story coming on or am in the right mood or actually have a decent idea!! LOL
yea, sorry 'bout that...i did warn ya, though!! FTW! i had an image in my head and had to go with it...ha ha..but hey, it's only a story!!

[kirakira_luxury]

I’ve read this stuff for years and your fiction sounds just as you have done the same. So: WOW! You seem to be a real natural at this :) that’s a great talent!
Soemtimes people start writing something and all you think when you read it is : “Holy shit, did you even go to school?” but your fictions are something special ♥ Did you read any guides before you started them?
Hey and of course you can write what you want, this story was intense. If I don’t like fictions, I won’t comment on them, I can only repeat myself it was intense, it made me very uncomfortable and that is special. It made me think of what could have happened afterwards and I just couldn’t picture a happy end. ;__;

Well, sexy man banging their brains out with each other is always hot. And it’s a great fandom to discover :O

[rkowhore79]

nope, i never read any guides or anything...i just discovered LJ when i was searching for randy icons for my myspace page one day....and then happened upon the fics as well...thought they were interesting and enjoyed reading them. it weirded me out at first LOL cuz i LOVE randy so much!! LOL and then one day i just said i think i'll take a shot at writing one myself, see if people like it or not....

[kaotic_princez]

My Gawd! That was so effin HOTT! Cena was a little evil in this one but he had his mind set on revenge so I guess it was justified lol this was really awesome! I ♥ it

[rkowhore79]

for some reason, as much as i ♥ randy...i'm always screwing him over..and under..lmfao!!

[kaotic_princez]

I would screw that man over, under, backwards, sideways, upside down... But it seems to work so well though lol

[616poisongirl]

WOW! Sadistic John I really like!!!
*fans self*