Comments | rl4sb4eva: Fic: So Much Movement Happens In This Stillness, Neal/Peter, Neal/Mozzie, NC-17

rl4sb4eva

Fic: So Much Movement Happens In This Stillness, Neal/Peter, Neal/Mozzie, NC-17

Dec 03, 2010 23:56

So Much Movement Happens In This Stillness.
Pairing: Neal/Peter, Neal/Mozzie
Rating: NC-17
Sequel/Prequel to Both, Neither
Disclaimer: Still not mine, title is taken from a quote by Richard Land.
Warning: Bondage, voyeurism, mostly bondage though.
A/N’s: After the lovely reviews I got on Both, Neither I wrote a sequel/prequel thing and this is it. Hope ( Read more... )

bondage, nc-17, neal/peter, fic, neal/mozzie, white collar

Comments 8

elrhiarhodan December 5 2010, 00:14:07 UTC

Excuse me...I need to hit my bunk.

Hard.

Please keep on writing WC fic. Hot, smutty WC fic.

rl4sb4eva December 5 2010, 01:52:15 UTC

NICE! The best compliment a pornographer can get involves hitting of bunks...
I shall continue writing if I can continue to convince the muses to not bugger off again. I forgot the rush I got from finishing a fic in 2 hours and getting it posted.
Thank you for commenting.
Rl

elrhiarhodan December 5 2010, 01:57:25 UTC

From one pornographer to another...I most certainly agree!

tuckatangent December 5 2010, 02:29:44 UTC

HOT AGAIN! I think Neal/Mozzie was pretty fucking hot, even if Neal was thinking of Peter, or whatever. Curious about the ending lines - Neal's been into bondage since he went to prison? Interesting. Thanks for this one!

rl4sb4eva December 5 2010, 20:43:57 UTC

Thank you. I think Neal/Mozzie is hot anyway (as is your icon, what's that from?)
I was trying to imply that Neal and Mozzie were partaking of this particular activity before Neal went to prison, but Mozzie feels that the fours years apart have damaged the relationship.
Thank you for the feedback.

rabidchild December 5 2010, 19:23:05 UTC

Wow, even hotter than the last one. Do please continue, you talented person you. Also, I hope Peter was once a boy scout or a sailing enthusiast or something cuz, you know, complicated knots.

rl4sb4eva December 5 2010, 20:42:37 UTC

Thank you for the lovely feedback. Glad they are getting hotter.
I may continue if I can, and as for Peter being a Boy Scout he seems like he would have been.
I'm kinda tempted to have him muddle through it though, get things wrong. That could be quite fun.

afiawri December 6 2010, 23:46:17 UTC

Oh, wow. I half want to say that was better than both, neither. But I think they were both amazingly burning hot. And beautiful. Your descriptions of the rope work were breath taking.