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rl4sb4eva

I Never Knew This Light Could Be So Violent - Grimm, Nick/Eddie

Nov 10, 2011 04:57

I Never Knew This Light Could Be So Violent
Pairing: Nick Burckhardt/Eddie Monroe
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: slight violence, possessive!nature, really flannelly descriptions!
Authors notes: Title is based on my mishearing of a line from No Light No Light by Florence and the Machine.
This is my first foray into fic for the Grimm fandom, and I might write ( Read more... )

fanfic, hard r, eddie monroe, grimm, nick burckhardt, nick/eddie

Comments 25

wenanona November 10 2011, 08:18:14 UTC

I am so unbelievably grateful. I've been starving for exactly this kind of story. The wolf aspect of the Nick/Eddie pairing is the part I love best. I just adore what you did here. I hope the muses inspire you to write more on it.

rl4sb4eva November 11 2011, 01:48:27 UTC

Thank you so much for the kind words, much appreciated.

As for the wolf parts, no one else was writing it and I was craving it myself, its just such a delicious idea.

If I can persuade the muses to aid me then I will be writing more.it was fun.
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anonymous November 10 2011, 21:26:02 UTC

This was wonderful! Please write more!

rl4sb4eva November 11 2011, 01:49:53 UTC

Thank you anon. You're very kind.
I really want to write more as it was fun to write this.
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floatxxaway November 12 2011, 01:36:50 UTC

Ohwowow <3 This is glorious. I love the use of second person pov and the switching between Eddie and Nick, and of course unfff, possessive!Eddie and the biting, and *flails* Amazing!

rl4sb4eva November 13 2011, 05:51:51 UTC

Thank you so much.
I really love writing in 2nd person, I just find it flows better and helps me get into the character better.
And possessive character traits are hot.
Thank you once again for taking the time to read and comment.
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nikko_tegonyan November 12 2011, 07:27:50 UTC

ldskfjlaskdjf ; A; <3 loved it.

rl4sb4eva November 13 2011, 05:52:22 UTC

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it.
Also loving the icon! They were so married in that film!
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csi_sanders1129 November 12 2011, 17:17:28 UTC

Awesome fic! Loving the POV shifts and the 2nd Person perspective, too. Really thrilled with the instinctual wolfiness, I'm working on something along the same lines so hopefully it turns out as well. :D

rl4sb4eva November 13 2011, 05:54:01 UTC

I was worried the POV shifts and the 2nd person would throw people out, I've had comments of that nature on other things I've written.
I suppose it's my idealised Eddie with the wolfiness. Nothing to do with it being hot, absolutely not!
How goes your fic? I'll keep an eye out, looking forward to lots of good things from this fandom.
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csi_sanders1129 November 13 2011, 07:56:19 UTC

I love 2nd Person POV fics, personally.

My fics up to like 8000 words, which is way longer than I intended but it has a mind of its own. Hopefully it'll be done soon.

Also, I <3 your icon.

rl4sb4eva November 13 2011, 09:42:14 UTC

Oh god, I love them too, both writing and reading. But it's a weird one to do, I got hooked when I read Complicity by Iain Banks as half the book is in 2nd person and I was intrigued as to what you could do with that kind of narrative device.

Wow, but sometimes a fic getting a mind of it's own is a good thing, and as long as you don't get tired of what you're writing it's even better. I wrote a 12'000 word story that was basically just porn, and it was fun to write.

I love Reid, and I loved that screencap when I was dicking around with VLC so it became an icon. He's just so gorram cute!