Week Six Journal Entry

[rlbooth]

 Where have the past six weeks gone??

This is just a poem/ something that I had made the other day, trying to get my mind of dreaded Uni Work and Assessments. Just too much :-(

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A WORLD TRULY UNKNOWN

They have been together, 
For so long now. 
Sharing a bond, that not a single soul can break 
As they sit there that night 
They stare at one another 
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[sallylim]

ooo I enjoyed reading this poem you've composed! It's very descriptive that i could visualise what is happening in my mind. Great use of similes and so on and i like the shape of your poem.