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[rlord]

so um, 'ive started my 'novel' which due to my lack of commitment im sure will be a short story.
i don't feel like typing up what i want to acco mplish in it yet, instead i'll just let you enjoy it for what it is at the moment, without my useless dribble. and im lazy, and a slow typer. beware, i havent proof read yet. tell me if things are awk.

Comments

[vonbruker]

beautiful. utterly beautiful.

especially the part about his voice cracking; it really humanizes him.

[rlord]

aaron dean.

[slightness]

i was gonna write something really mean here, but i deleted it.

[rlord]

go to hell, thaats even worse.

[slightness]

sorry, I'll buy you flowers