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FIC: A is for Acquisition

Feb 27, 2011 22:52

Title: A is for Acquisition
Author: roadkill2580
Rating: PG13
Pairings: Lucius Malfoy/Hermione Granger
Prompt(s): Acquisition
Warnings: mentions of bribery and blackmail
Summary: He cannot acquire her for the same reasons he desires her.
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter.
A/N: Written for windlar,

( A is for Acquisition )

oneshot, character: lucius malfoy, pairing: lucius/hermione, hp fics, character: hermione granger, hetfic, hp fic, meme fic, drabbles, drabble

Comments 5

maria_lynette February 28 2011, 04:55:47 UTC

"The reasons why he can't catch her are the reasons he admires her." . . . So true. I think we all feel that way about someone we want at least once in our lives.

roadkill2580 February 28 2011, 05:42:08 UTC

I felt like I sort of had to address that. We always have Lucius desiring Hermione for her cunning, and yet he always outsmarts her. This is usually explained away by Lucius being more experienced, a Slytherin, etc. But I wanted him to be the one wanting for once. Thankies for the comment!

auntlynnie February 28 2011, 14:09:23 UTC

"If only he could blackmail her. But the girl was just as sneaky and cunning as he was. He privately felt she must've been sorted incorrectly."

tee hee! Awesome. I love the way you convey his feelings of being frustrated and thwarted.

roadkill2580 February 28 2011, 16:29:44 UTC

I was hoping for that feeling to come across, but Lucius is difficult for me to write. I was worried he sounded too lovesick. But I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting!

Hey cheshiresophini March 21 2011, 22:08:11 UTC

** Despite knowing many of her misdeeds, he could not pin a single one on her. **

Oh Hermione, how I envy you....
Loved it. You seem to capture the essence of the character(s) you write so well. I finally got my LJ account so this is my first comment here! I must say, I love all of your fics.