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roadtoanywhere

476 C.E. - Nine: Hypertonality

Jun 16, 2011 14:20

Author says: I finished this a few days ago and forgot to post here. It's too long to fit into one LJ entry, and splitting chapters irritates me. So, uhh, here's the LINK TO IT ON FICTIONPRESS.

Thanks. As always, feedback is appreciated. :)

476, fic

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rokittomars June 17 2011, 00:59:20 UTC

Hypertonality was such an awesome fit for this, I love it.

Harry fricking Potter
Don't know if you meant it, but AVPM 2 REFERENCE FTW!

Ah! My friends have the what kind of drunk are you conversation all the time. I think I was deemed "cuddly drunk". Theoretically.

"Do I really have to do this? Why can't I just play tonight's show with a black eye? We can tell them I single-handedly fought off a swarm of ninjas or something. Hell, tell them that a crowd of adoring fanboys wanted my body and I had to fight them off."
*handhearts* Rome, oh my god, I love him. His character just keeps coming out of his shell more and more and I love it. The way your writing him, it's more like getting to know him, rather than having an entire personality thrust on you at once. Which can be annoying. So yay!

Rome's panic attack :( It was even more sad because it was so plausible, and so...justifiable. Him hiding it from everyone too just made it even more hurty. ..."I don't like sedatives," I answered piteously. "Feel so…vulnerable." AGH! STOP HURTING ( ... )

roadtoanywhere June 17 2011, 02:16:46 UTC

I had a hard time naming this chapter. I ended up thinking "Hm, what's the clashiest, most dissnonant piece of music I know?" So, then I thought of Penderecki's Threnody, and googled that. That's how I found the term "hypertonality." :D

The AVPS reference was 100% intended, by ME at least... I don't know if October intended it. YOU DECIDE.

I am thrilled that you like Rome, and that my emotional torture was effective! Wait...it sounds bad when I phrase it like that. Uhh...

Yesss. Horny Rome will be something that I'll have ENTIRELY too much fun writing. So your expecting of things is valid.

I actually prefer LJ comments. :P That way, if someone has a question or something, I only have to answer it once instead of replying to x amount of reviews. :D Plus it lets me know that I do have friends here. I don't have many. xD

Thanks for commenting!