Lost inside your time.

Jun 19, 2004 10:56

Where a single touch can leave you breathless...where milkywhite flesh draws the eyes to curves and crevices unseen when clothed....this is where poundings of the heart are heard so loudly in your ears you could swear they are tribal drums... and dancing upon flesh are your fingertips...and caressing her neck are your soothing lips. She is so ( Read more... )

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n_campbell June 19 2004, 20:57:19 UTC
There are moments in time when you make me cry, never in a bad way, but because your words touch me, take hold of me and make me wish for...

Worthy in more ways than you realise.

And I'd give up forever to touch you ( ... )

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rob_dickinson June 19 2004, 21:51:08 UTC
You are all that I am, and it's easy to feel unworthy of something as remarkable as you. You take my very breath away, that I do ache to only breathe you..

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n_campbell June 20 2004, 00:40:51 UTC
That is all I want to be.

You leave me breathless, tongue tied and mesmerised, how can you feel unworthy when just standing in your light makes me a better person... whole.

breathe me...

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r_weisz June 19 2004, 21:04:03 UTC
there is so much beauty in your words, you capture images perfectly. I wish I could write like you.

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rob_dickinson June 19 2004, 21:49:41 UTC
You have more potential then you realise, you just never wish to tap it. You have deepth and beauty and you keep it locked away. You should try opening the little box sometime.

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bieljessica June 19 2004, 21:23:22 UTC
That was beautiful.

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rob_dickinson June 19 2004, 21:48:37 UTC
thank you..I only write what I see. And I see beauty all around and inlaid..

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suvarimena June 20 2004, 00:18:32 UTC
who is this woman?

beautiful poem

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rob_dickinson June 20 2004, 00:31:17 UTC
She is the woman of my dreams, she is the shadow unto the light and the darkness that intrigues me.

my thanks

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suvarimena June 20 2004, 00:47:04 UTC
who is she?!

don't make me hurt you

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rob_dickinson June 20 2004, 00:51:42 UTC
perhaps reading the comments or other posts of mine would prove it to not be very difficult. I told you who she is. I just didn't offer a name. I call her Shadow.

why would you do that?

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*stalks* n_campbell June 20 2004, 01:37:43 UTC
*sob* you used the twinkie icon...

And you know it's my twinkie.

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Re: *stalks* rob_dickinson June 20 2004, 01:41:15 UTC
I did it just for you my luv.

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Was... but now it's mine. n_campbell June 20 2004, 01:43:47 UTC
I know and that's what makes me stalk you all the more. ;)

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put it in your mouth and swallow it whole. rob_dickinson June 20 2004, 01:55:48 UTC
of course my dear.

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