***I'd rather rip out my intestines with a fork Than watch you going out with other men***
The bolded part caught me up while I was reading this because the rest reads smoothly as truly not wanting to have anything to do with her, but that part seems the opposite so it stopped me in the flow of reading.
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We could also just turn MontiLee loose on whoever this song was for...
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Some nonsense about a "conscience".
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Than watch you going out with other men***
The bolded part caught me up while I was reading this because the rest reads smoothly as truly not wanting to have anything to do with her, but that part seems the opposite so it stopped me in the flow of reading.
Otherwise, graphic and real - I like it.
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