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[robkristenlove]

Title: Such Certain Ambiguity
Rating: Mild R for language
Pairing: R/K...duh
Summary: Late night visits. Set back in the good ol' days of filming twilight.
Disclaimer: I don't own them...sad day.

As the steady rain beat down upon the roof of Rob's apartment, he lay sprawled out on the couch--his limbs hanging off the sides totally limp with exhaustion.

Comments

[lovekarinaxx]

woww
i love this! the plot is really good :) i love twilight filming fics :)
i would just suggest you look at your tenses...you changed from past tense to present tense about halfway through.
apart from that, AMAZING!

[robkristenlove]

Thanks! :)
hahaha I noticed that too, I'm gonna go back and change it. It's a really bad habit of mine.

[lovekarinaxx]

no worries!
hope i didnt seem like a total bitch!
:)

[robkristenlove]

No, not at all! I love the critisism (:

[innesofmysoul]

you should continue of course :)

[eviep]

I am speechless, that was beautifullt written!
Please continue?

[kstew4]

This is really beautiful!
I love it! ♥

[kiwi096]

Wow I really really loved this &hearts