FIC: "Drive" (7/?) - Iron Man (movieverse), Tony/Pepper, R

Apr 26, 2011 02:08

 "Drive"

Written for the Valentine's challenge at its_always_been . See master page for prompts, author's notes, and previous/subsequent chapters.

Bonus author's notes: I can't sleep, so you get to have this now. Enjoy.

7. Business Hours )

smut!, drive, iron man, tony/pepper, fic

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firstflier April 26 2011, 09:28:45 UTC
Poor, poor Tony! Always sticking his foot in his mouth and he doesn't know when to stop. Another brilliant chapter.

I really enjoyed the character of Nicki and your writing ability makes her a fully realised character with backstory etc without much effort. I also love seeing Pepper's detachment from the situation and how in control she is. It's a nice change from the damsel in distress role she's often plonked in. Really, really enjoyed this part and looking forward to the next installment.

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roboticonograph April 26 2011, 22:31:43 UTC
Thanks! I think that OCs can be a really effective tool if they're used sparingly--I know that y'all don't want to read about the hilarious and heartwarming adventures of Nicki, but I wanted to show that smart, cool women are interested in Tony. I find that there's this compulsion in fandom to either demonize or, um, bimbo-ize (for lack of a better word) the girls Tony hooks up with, when in fact in the films the majority of the women he shows any interest in (Christine, Natalie, and of course Pepper herself) are intelligent and articulate as well as attractive.

Thanks for reading. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the next few chapters as they are posted!

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dracutgrl April 26 2011, 11:28:52 UTC
I just adore this fic. Tony is teetering and Pepper is staying rock steady. Poor, poor Tony.

Maybe he should have "walked" Nikki to her car!

(And the line about him having had sex in Pepper's office lots of time - true or not - was hilarious).

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roboticonograph April 26 2011, 22:33:37 UTC
Hee! Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it. The other night, I had a hard time sleeping and I sat and read through a bunch of your stories. :)

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luckytohaveher April 26 2011, 13:00:50 UTC
Your stories have given me a Tony!angst kink, dude.

I REGRET NOTHING.

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roboticonograph April 26 2011, 22:34:20 UTC
IT ONLY GETS WORSE FROM HERE.

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serenitysea April 26 2011, 13:08:12 UTC
Ohhhh, these two. *shakes head*

I have to hand it to Pepper... for sticking to her guns and trying so hard to stay one step ahead of him at all times... But I really feel like this is going to come back and bite her in the ass.

Poor Tony.

Nice bit of character development though, that he didn't go after the photog. Proud of him. :)

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roboticonograph April 26 2011, 22:36:15 UTC
Great icon!

Yeah, Pepper's iron will is not all it's cracked up to be, as upcoming chapters will reveal.

Thanks for reading. :)

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spockside April 26 2011, 14:27:12 UTC
I have increased respect for Pepper's iron will. And a modicum of approval for Tony's forbearance.

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roboticonograph April 26 2011, 22:36:44 UTC
Thanks! Hope future chapters will continue not to disappoint. :)

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