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Carnage and its Compliments
Apr 12, 2007 11:37
I am the one built by bloodshed and bones (
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mrs_destroyer
April 12 2007, 15:41:42 UTC
i like
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blowjob
April 12 2007, 16:04:46 UTC
did you write this? Its deep. But understandable. I love this verus
And we shall ride the storm,
to bring the Plague in its truest form.
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fraudinthe80s
April 13 2007, 16:30:52 UTC
I really enjoyed that, you should write more :)
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danii
April 13 2007, 19:40:19 UTC
Wow! This is really good!
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jimi_hiryu
April 13 2007, 19:52:43 UTC
The song has some pretty bold verses in it, but the first thing I'd tell you is that it lacks cohesion from statement to statement, but that's only because we need to see more of your lyrics.
So yeah, keep up the good job, let's see where it goes.
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So yeah, keep up the good job, let's see where it goes.
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