Carnage and its Compliments

Apr 12, 2007 11:37

I am the one built by bloodshed and bones ( Read more... )

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mrs_destroyer April 12 2007, 15:41:42 UTC
i like

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blowjob April 12 2007, 16:04:46 UTC
did you write this? Its deep. But understandable. I love this verus

And we shall ride the storm,
to bring the Plague in its truest form.

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fraudinthe80s April 13 2007, 16:30:52 UTC
I really enjoyed that, you should write more :)

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danii April 13 2007, 19:40:19 UTC
Wow! This is really good!

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jimi_hiryu April 13 2007, 19:52:43 UTC
The song has some pretty bold verses in it, but the first thing I'd tell you is that it lacks cohesion from statement to statement, but that's only because we need to see more of your lyrics.

So yeah, keep up the good job, let's see where it goes.

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