Smiles chapter 21

Oct 26, 2007 13:30

Title: SMILES

Disclaimer: Naruto and its characters are copyright of Masashi Kishimoto-sensei.

Pairings: Lee/Gaara, Shikamaru/???, Naruto/???

Rating: PG to NC17

Summary: After loosing Shukaku and the immense power it represented for Gaara, the said Kazekage started to train to compensate that loose. He just has one hanging subject: Taijutsu ( Read more... )

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noo cliffhanger!! candyhouze November 8 2007, 00:37:55 UTC
update update! >W

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Re: noo cliffhanger!! rock_gaara November 8 2007, 09:52:33 UTC
I dunno... ^.^U This fanfic doesn't look very popuar here... :(

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Re: noo cliffhanger!! mangagirl1 November 9 2007, 02:59:11 UTC
Please don't judge your own writing that way. I bet a lot of people want to comment on it and plan to later. I do that myself most of the time. I will even wait months before returning to comment on a story that I felt strongly about. I that this story was suspenseful, and exciting. You kept your readers on the edge of their seats with this division between Naruto, Gaara, and Lee. I thought the very idea of a love conflict amongst the three was brilliant ( ... )

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Re: noo cliffhanger!! rock_gaara November 9 2007, 11:20:59 UTC
Very kind of you to comment back *blushes*. I wasn't going to give up on this story since it's the only one I have courage enough to writte it down and in English, no less. The truth is that, comments make a great difference. This won't sound modest at all but... in Y!Gallery I'm a bit more 'famous' and at least there, if I don't get comments, I still get to know how many people read it. The truth is that I post the chapters here once I've finished writting them, but in Y!Gallery I have the revised and corrected version (I recommend it to you) but the submission of chapters is taking longer since I wasn't very lucky with my beta readers... ^_^U

Thanks a lot for your comment, it really ment a lot to me.

My Y!Gallery account: http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/user/rockgaara/

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pharaohofdon December 26 2007, 08:20:31 UTC
I've gone through and read the chapters and I have to say they're pretty amazing. I hope you continue posting them but if not I'll just look them up on your Y!Gallery account. Awesome job! :)

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rock_gaara December 27 2007, 11:44:43 UTC
Thanks a lot for reading. As I said, I think like a few times now... xD, it's kind of hard for me to write in English. I also wanted to end this fic before I 'stopped liking' LeeGaara as much as I did. I must confess that, at the moment, I'm too much into ShikaChou and all the beta readers that happen to come to me end 'abandoning' me... ^_^UU

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the_luna_wren June 2 2008, 22:37:48 UTC
Dude! Why the absence of updates?

It doesn't matter how popular the story is in general because you have several people reading it religiously!

PLEASE UPDATE!

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rock_gaara June 25 2008, 22:33:45 UTC
Dx Well... I'll try to...

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